|Reviews for Of Packages and Punches|
| acosta perez jose ramiro chapter 1 . 8/23/2013
Love this story. Excellent job with all the characters and training-fight scenes.
Keep the good writing.
| Dragonjek chapter 1 . 11/4/2012
| Saark chapter 1 . 5/31/2012
That was a fun read.
| Allo chapter 1 . 3/18/2012
This was EPIC! The end with twilight and rarity was especially funny.
| TharzZzDunN chapter 1 . 2/18/2012
Pretty darn good work! I liked seeing the nod to AJT's Progress, that always gives a good buzz, ya know?
Only a couple of nitpicky things, Trampsylvania would probably work just as well without an s, after mentioning the abacus Celestia says that you would know what that is, Harriet is referred to as a He near the end.
Hope to see you punching out another one!
| KungFuTruffle chapter 1 . 12/23/2011
Great story. Everyone was in character, it was sweet, it was incredibly funny, and Luna was adorable throughout all of it. Instant fav. :)
| Lord Dragon Claw chapter 1 . 10/14/2011
You, sir, are a magnificent Bastard King! I loved this fic so much, it brightened my day.
| P.A.W.07 chapter 1 . 10/5/2011
Oh my... this seriously has to be one of my favorite MLP humor fanfics I've ran across so far. There were so many puns in there that I just loved. My particular favorite was the Over 9000 crack and the beginning with Celestia and the guard-colt. Her eccentric attitude just grabbed me right away. XD
Not Rarity X Luna on the dance floor but maybe... Rarity X Twilight? Oh that was a great little teaser, but I loved the little hints of Luna X Mac. it was cute.
Anyway, there were a dozen things I loved in here and I thank you for sharing. Its an instant favorite.
| Endam chapter 1 . 9/28/2011
That was AMAZING
| the grey mage chapter 1 . 9/9/2011
it may not have won, but none the less, i love you. it was 4:48 am when i got to the part they remembered that nopony taught luna to actually box. my roommates told me to shut the fuck up. i only continued to laugh. best part was when pinkie said "time skip."
| ChaotixController chapter 1 . 8/20/2011
I really have to say I enjoyed this story. Some of the content seemed a bit teen rated but still was humerous that it worked wonders in the overall run. The mainstream characters atcted like I would have thought and the other charcaters you used in this really added some more punch in the plot and the humor.
you really have created a masterpeice. The best MLP fic I have read.
| Attentive Listener chapter 1 . 8/20/2011
I am honestly impressed. Very good story. The writing was well structured and there were few errors. I like the cross story references and fanon insertions quite a lot. And Gurren Lagann. Overall, 5/5. Luna is undoubtedly very happy with this.
| Andrew Joshua Talon chapter 1 . 8/19/2011
Very well done! You definitely brought a smile to my face with this one, and to Luna's as well! Great work!
| I am done here 727184 chapter 1 . 8/19/2011
WAS THE BEST STORY EVER!
I imagined every sentance!
This is probobly my favorite story of all time.
Even though this took 5 hours to read, it was worth it!
I hope to see more from you in the future!
You have my fave and subscription!
You had EVERYTHING perfect.
ONE and only ONE typo.
It's Pinkie Pie. Not Pinky Pie.
BUT OTHER THAN THAT...
You are amazing!