Reviews for breath normal, nerves normal
theSardonyx chapter 1 . 1/31/2016
Wow. This is so heartwarming. If I'm not updated to Homestuck, I might have put this in as a possible scenario.

I never understood how a second-person POV is written, but I guess this is how you do it.

Write on.!
~Yuna
Randomstrike chapter 1 . 1/15/2013
Cant stop the tears
cm2 chapter 1 . 1/13/2013
how could you do this to me oww

you are beyond wonderful I can't believe the way you write it's so incredible. and inspirational.
Prish chapter 1 . 11/1/2012
That was heartbreaking ;_; You are a really good writer, the language you use is very poetic and it fit this story beautifully. I think you captured the feeling of inevitability that surrounds death really well, and you really managed to flesh out one of the saddest scenes in Homestuck and make it actually frightening. I think this is probably one of my favorite gen fics of all time, and definitely one of the best Homestuck-fics I've ever read.
Samurai5725 chapter 1 . 6/11/2012
;_; For all of the sadstuck and otherwise tragic homestuck fics I've read so far congratulations for this being the only one to actually bring me to tears. Oh god, just take my tears as my sacrifice.
Selena Estella chapter 1 . 3/6/2012
:'( So sad! I loved it, but it was so sad!
Ky chapter 1 . 2/7/2012
The sound you just heard was my heart breaking. Again damnit. Just take all of my tears. All of them.
stripess chapter 1 . 11/5/2011
I have no words, this is beautiful.
starwanker chapter 1 . 8/30/2011
Awww so sad! But cute, because I have this sneaking suspicion beneath all the puppet asses and stoic, cool irony Bro was a good guardian and brother...slash dad. This is really heartwarming, but not mushy. Great job!
airquotes chapter 1 . 8/21/2011
holy shit that was beautiful and all of my tears belong to you now.
xxx0 chapter 1 . 8/19/2011
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