Reviews for Breaking Down
Kryssy Suicide chapter 31 . 6/10/2014
Have to say I hate this wasn't finished, but I hope one day you might still one day.
Guest chapter 19 . 11/18/2012
Lycan Lover 411 chapter 31 . 9/26/2012
OMG! I read this ages ago, but only now realize I never reviewed! :O Sorry! I loved it though! :D :D Poor Brook! :O And that fight between Derek and Jackson was awesome! :D You used Derek's line from "Pack Mentality" when Derek fights Scott! :D :D :D
TheFanFictioner chapter 31 . 7/7/2012
I'm addicted! Can't wait til the sequel. Ahhhhh!
Micheal the Archangel chapter 31 . 6/11/2012
Hey, nice story you got here, and I am a major fan of your other story. Though I gotta your sequel to your other story, how is Brook gonna take Derek's new attitude, and him turning teenagers left and right into werewolves. Something tells me she and him are gonna go through a ruff patch together.

I actually had an idea one time after reading through your other story that you should include another hunter character, a older brother for Brooklyn. But unlike her he hates Werewolves with a blinding passion, so much that he kills anyone associated with them. This do to his girl who he was going to marry was murdered while she was carrying his child inside of her, the wolf literally cut her open and ate the baby inside. So now he hunts them with an unbridal passion and fury. Though Brook might be the one person he forgives.

Also Here was another thought, for a little side plot. What if in your sequel Brook gets tired of Derek basically forgetting her and their kids and being the alpha more then ever. So she leaves with the kids. But then she comes across someone knew to town...another Alpha I like to call Drake, a older fellow, about five years older then Derek who has been creating a large pack of about 12 wolves...and he's looking to make brook lucky number 13. and given how angry and alone she might be feeling, she might just take him up on his offer.

Anyways I look forward to this next chapter and the first of season 2.

Keep up the good work.
shawzielass94 chapter 31 . 5/15/2012
I know this is going to sound far fetched but i really want Derek and Brooklyn back together,, for good,, f**k Jackson thu lil brat and f**k Peter... But still very very good,, just like your other stories... I enjoy how you've made up different scenerios with Brooklyn.. :P
binxs13 chapter 31 . 5/6/2012
Love it! Can't wait till the bonus chapter lol
Geminigypsy521 chapter 1 . 5/6/2012
Is it horrible that I am pro Jackson/Brooke? lol. If it is I don't care, I love them together. It's so hot and intense! This story is amazing3
Lycan Lover 411 chapter 30 . 4/3/2012
AWESOME! I'v been waiting for ages for you to update! That was a really good chapter chapter! And I like the way the hunters are back in the story, because they havn't really been mentioned in this story :D :D
binxs13 chapter 30 . 4/3/2012
Ohh no! Hunters! That sucks ! Great chapter though I liked it(:
Lycan Lover 411 chapter 29 . 3/12/2012
Coolness! :D :D I'v been waiting for you to updates for AGES :)
binxs13 chapter 29 . 3/11/2012
Great chapter I loved it (:
Monkeyface-fan1 chapter 28 . 2/20/2012
More please
binxs13 chapter 28 . 2/20/2012
Good job but I hate Jackson ):
Lycan Lover 411 chapter 27 . 2/14/2012
Love your story! It's so cool!
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