Reviews for Gray Zones
A reader chapter 2 . 9/1/2014
While unprotected sex is all too common, still slightly woah about Soul being a little insensitive to the fact that Maka could get pregnant. Then again, Maka barely complained. And was it being implied towards the end that Maka is pregnant when it was said that she was outright avoiding alcohol? Also, I liked the idea of a healing sort of story, quite touching. Another lovely story I've read of yours, and Lacrow, if I am correct?
roro213421 chapter 2 . 7/30/2014
Isn't maka pregnant epilogue plzzz
Ulcaasi chapter 2 . 4/1/2014
:3
Ulcaasi chapter 1 . 4/1/2014
You say that now. And then I'll open the next chapter and Soul or Killik or Maka's dad or someone, would be dead and I'll be sad and Maka'll be all disraught and crying and I'll be sad and plotting your murder and reading your stories in jail with the charge of attempted murder.
Dark Philosopher 1775 chapter 2 . 1/31/2014
MAKA's PREGNANT?! LOVE IT!
(Longer/better reviews on your stories will be upcoming)
Hackingofthedead chapter 2 . 8/3/2013
You know, I've had this story in my folder since it pretty much came out two years ago...

...and I just now got my lazy ass to read it.

This was wonderful, very touching and happy and sad and everything in between. Everything happened at the right place at the right time. I'm mad that it took two years to read this, but I am happy that it was most defiantly worth the wait.
kawaiigiraffe4 chapter 2 . 6/5/2013
Awwwwwwww! Like I said before, I'm not big on reviewing, but I always feel like I have to say something, and sometimes i dont, sometimes I do. This time I did, but I'm not sire what to say so let's leave it at this.
kawaiigiraffe4 chapter 1 . 6/5/2013
I'm not too big on reviewing (not because I dont like the stories I read, Im just not good at it) but I had to say that Regina Spektor is my favorite artist and you put part of her song in your story. So of course I had to mention this. Great fanfic btw.
HornedHelmet chapter 2 . 5/6/2013
Dammit, Soul! All I need is that one little clue. She fuckin pregnant. I'm so happy for you unprotected fuckers! *squeal*
AngelFromTheLost chapter 2 . 3/28/2013
I LOVED IT! ANOTHER JOB WELL DONE!
steph chapter 2 . 2/13/2013
Thx I'm crying at 3 in the morning (':
2clap chapter 2 . 11/30/2012
I'm like crying. That was seriously beautiful.

My brother-in-law is in Afghanistan right now and it's really hard on my older sister, especially because he has a hard time talking about what he sees over there. I really miss him but I know he will be back soon. This really made me think about all the shit he is going through over there and even though I just saw him for thanksgiving it still hurts that he had to leave.

Likewise I am so happy I read this story
Vanidades chapter 2 . 9/29/2012
Just one thing comes to my mind: beautiful.
x.-kTa-.x chapter 2 . 1/8/2012
Oh, I'm getting slow at posting my rr (and reading your stories haha) It's just that, I don't know why, it's been a while now since the last time I wanted to read something, and that's killing me. I LOVE READING, for Gods sake! I don't understand why I'm not reading (I'm not making any sense at all, I know, but still!)

Well, that is to explain why I haven't posted my rr lately (a lot laaately...). Maybe you don't remember me, I don't blame you haha you have a lot of lectos :) But I love giving you rr, because I like your stories and style soooo much!

This one was beautiful. The first part almost made me cry. I was wondering, why did you choose Kid instead of BlackStar? Just curious, but I kinda liked Kid in the context of the story, it gives off a warmer feeling to it...

And that's it! I hope I can leave my next rr soon! hahaha

Take care :)

(and...yeah, sorry for the english, it's been a while since I wrote this much :/ )
gemswillfall chapter 2 . 1/6/2012
I love it. Both parts. I can't put into words how wonderful these are.

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