Reviews for Eternal Art
Guest chapter 15 . 9/8/2013
That was poorly written and it now needs a sequel for it to make sense cause it really doesn't make any right now.
Guest chapter 15 . 11/30/2012
I get confused at the first part...but ok...another creamy YAOI
Guest chapter 11 . 11/30/2012
O.O :'(
Guest chapter 3 . 11/30/2012
OMG!
OMG!
Guest chapter 1 . 11/30/2012
O.o Iwagakure...Tsukoyomi?-BURST IN LAUGHTER- LOLLLLLLLLL!
Dana-Eliza chapter 15 . 8/22/2012
So I read this when I was on vacation, but couldn't review at the time, so I wanted to do it now
I really liked the story. Nicely written and I liked how you portrayed Sasori. I find him very difficult, but I think you did a great job.
At first I needed to get into it, but later on you really took me in with the drama and some cliffhangers. It was so sad that Kisame died and eventhough I hated it, it was perfect for the story.
It was just a shame that you left so many questions unanswered. What happened to Sasori's drinking? What kind of business does Tobi really have? And what the hell happened between Yahiko and Nagato? It's not that the plot needed this, but I would have liked to see the details answered;)

Overal it was great and I enjoyed it a lot reading it by the pool!
LadyMakara chapter 15 . 3/8/2012
screw you for killing Kisame! Poor Itachi! T/.\T

Although cute ending Sasdei FTW xx Well done though. glad you finally finished it xx
Lazy Gaga chapter 15 . 3/7/2012
GAH! Everything was just adorably sweet! Great job! :D
Happii Haden chapter 15 . 3/5/2012
Aw it's over! An epilogue wud be nice and uh

"Sasori smiled softly and licked the slit, precum covering it. Deidara could feel the wetness of Kaito's mouth cover his member"

Ano I think Kaito trolled his way in there lol
Happii Haden chapter 14 . 2/6/2012
D: naw Kisa died I actually feel sorrii for Itachi for once.
LadyMakara chapter 12 . 1/21/2012
Don't you bloody dare kill off Kisame! Think of poor Itachi!

P.s how long's this gonna be? Xxx
LadyMakara chapter 10 . 1/2/2012
YOU HAVE TO TELL ME WHEN YOU UPDATE! I don't often loggin to my account so text me when you upload!

I FOUND THE COW! I still find that funny. an hour she spent looking for that cow! and I deleted the vlog coz it was crap! xxx keep up the good work hun! xxx
DeathByDarkness13 chapter 10 . 1/1/2012
I FREAKING LOVE YOU! *glomps*

Yay you added the NaruSasu! :'D It was so cute when Sasuke ran to hug Naruto and they kissed. :3 I'm kinda mad at Itachi for beating Naruto though, poor guy.

I'm so glad that Sasori's outta the hospital, and ohmygosh the ending was perfect. "Because I'm finally happy." That was so sweet.

You did an amazing job on this chapter and I can see you've really progressed with your writing; the details are so vivid, like I truly felt like I was in a hospital as I read this. Your description of the boys were really well done as well, something about the way you described Naruto for example just made his seem so real.

Can't wait for the rest, and thankyouthankyouthankyou for that extra dose of Sasuke/Naruto, I'm forever indebted to you *spams love*
Shr0ud chapter 9 . 12/25/2011
Damn, im going through an itasasu withdrawl. Good job otherwise though!
Shr0ud chapter 5 . 12/22/2011
I was reading the review response section and i recognized the users. I think that thereca quite a few hardcore sasodei fans (myself included) u got reading this lovely fic.
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