Reviews for Art Attack
MaDeR Levap chapter 5 . 8/13/2014
Er, first Haruka, now Tsuruko? Come on, it is getting silly.
Please update chapter 8 . 10/20/2013
Please update
Fox Boss chapter 8 . 1/20/2013
Ohh, I'm loving the Kitsune/Tsuruko rivalry. I can see Motoko thinking the sticks are some kind of weird new shinai(bamboo sword, usually a practice sword for sparring).
I can also see Su shooting balls with her feet and scoring.
Guest chapter 8 . 1/4/2013
Good stuff.
Wonderbee31 chapter 8 . 1/1/2013
Heh, Tsuruko can suremputthe screws to Keitaro there when it comes time to put his mind in knots there, as well as Kitsune sure able to carry her own plans forward with all due haste.
A raging Ghost chapter 8 . 12/30/2012
hmmm looking forward to this
Lyther chapter 8 . 12/26/2012
Hey Raa as always a new chapter and an even better addition to your story! Keep up the good work, I look forward to the next installment of Art Attack.
Lyther
Samhan chapter 8 . 12/26/2012
I prefer Tsuruko to be with Keitaro more than Kitsune, but what about the other girls, especially Naru?
Thowell3 chapter 8 . 12/25/2012
In all honesty I am leaning more towards liking the TsurukoXKeitaro relationship. I think they would do wonders for each other.
Morsamare chapter 8 . 12/25/2012
... this is an awesome fic. Just found it today and I have to say Raa, I love the characters and the interactions. I suppose this is indeed the difference between erotica and porn. Looking forward to the next chapter
Major Mike Powell III chapter 8 . 12/25/2012
Well, well, soldier...

This was a really nice Christmas present, my friend! And here I thought this story was dead. X_X But Hell, I love it when I'm wrong like this! LOL

This was really, really N-I-CE!

Tsuruko has finally come clean and declared her intentions with Keitaro, and that was excellent logic by Tsuruko, saying that if Keitaro didn't even try to be with her, she would be even more let down. Very clever, with very nice results!

Meanwhile, Kitsune finds a pool table, and NOW she wants to get into Keitaro's pants? (Shifty Eyes) Sorry Fox, but you're too late. (Facepalm) No matter how slutty she may be now, Keitaro is Tsuruko's man, and I highly doubt she's willing to share. LOL

Now, let the game of Killer begin!

Great work! Happy Holidays!
Update ASAP! That's an order!

Semper-Fi! Carry on!
kazikamikaze24 chapter 8 . 12/25/2012
I am happy to see an update for this story in such a while. It is a good story that I feel should be read by many readers, though I do hope that Kitsune doesn't get Keitaro in the end. Not that I don't like her, but she (in my mind) lost her fair shot.
Mev852 chapter 7 . 9/9/2012
I lost track of this story a long time ago, when it was only on TFF and RL prevented me from doing anything in fan fiction. I'm glad to see where you've gone with it.

I do enjoy how the varying arcs in this story, and how it slowly weaved back to Keitaro's second job. Kei's budding relationship with Tsuruko was unexpected, but a welcome introduction to the story. It certainly adds another layer of intrigue to the whole thing. keitaro's reaction to the kiss, and what happens next will be entertaining, especially when throwing Kitsune into the mix. Plus, it would be interesting to see what the rest of the Hinata honeys are doing in Kobe.
Zamin chapter 7 . 6/29/2012
Fun and interesting. I can't help but wonder what will happen once the other girls discover that their likenesses were used in an erotic novel. It will either be horifically violent... or hilariously funny.
XTheOneTrueGamer chapter 1 . 5/30/2012
Dude you really need to continue this story. This has got to be the most original Love Hina story I've ever read, and would love to read more, especially after that cliffhanger in Chapter 7.
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