|Reviews for Pokemon: Silver memories|
| Redhybrid chapter 1 . 1/9/2013
hhmm nice beggning
| Leah chapter 1 . 7/17/2012
| chaotic-iak chapter 1 . 8/26/2011
You know, it's rather annoying to write three reviews at once.
Mainly the same as the review on technobook's; some spelling/grammar/capitalization errors, rather clear plot, and...that's all. Just improve the presentation of the story.
Good luck with your story!
| Yoshu-chan chapter 1 . 8/23/2011
good but it's a bit short
| technobook chapter 1 . 8/20/2011
this is good You are a really good writer I wonder what will happen next ;)
| EM98 chapter 1 . 8/19/2011
Nice. However you forgot to capitalize some of the Pokemon names towards the end. And I think you should've put some line breakers to seperate past from present. One when you switch to the past and when you switch back to the present. And you should add a bit more detail.
"WELCOME TO THE SEMI-FINALS OF THE POKEMON LEAGUE" the announcer hollered as the crowd roared.
There should be a , between League and the
I think you should increase the size of future chapters.
Still, this is good for a first chapter and story. Sorry I couldn't email you earlier, spent most of the day in the car heading to my aunt and uncle's house.
I think you should refrain from posting chapter 2 until the rest of us get our chapter one's posted. Still, good job