|Reviews for To Feel Alive|
| lovelaugh-write chapter 1 . 9/15/2011
Awesome ending to the story. I like it more than the real one, haha. Those two are great together.
| Mika the Dark princess chapter 1 . 9/11/2011
| danrdarrenc chapter 1 . 9/5/2011
Well that gives a whole new meaning to the little head nod acknowledgement-thingy on King's Cross Nineteen Years Later. ;)
| lilz54 chapter 1 . 8/31/2011
| Mantinas chapter 1 . 8/27/2011
Bittersweet is always the sweetest story ever told. _
| Sheri Contrary chapter 1 . 8/26/2011
I can totally imagine this happening...exactly like you wrote it! )
Only one issue (because I'm weird about some stuff). You wrote:
"I was under my invisibility cloak. He immobilized me so that I wouldn't get myself killed trying to help him. I was laying right over there," Harry finished, pointing.
It should read, "I was lying right over there," Harry finished, pointing. The very you want is 'to lie' (which means to rest or recline), whereas 'to lay' means to place or put. Harry wasn't placing or putting over there, he was resting (or reclining) over there. Make sense?
| MikaDiamond95 chapter 1 . 8/21/2011
Ooooh woow! This is awesome and I'm love it sooo much!keep up good work XD
| Ttys it'd ku chapter 1 . 8/21/2011
That was lovely! I really enjoyed it, well done!
| Evraska chapter 1 . 8/21/2011
You manage to describe their feelings so well, and the sex was hot... It could have been sad since they go their own way at the end, but the fact that they remember it years after it happened, and that Harry still blushes about it makes it not so sad I think. I love it !
| MirrorFlower and DarkWind chapter 1 . 8/20/2011
oh wow sad and happy i loved it
| Krucksue chapter 1 . 8/20/2011
| Doni chapter 1 . 8/20/2011
That was rather bittersweet. At least they were there for each other for that one moment. Nicely done.
| nyxxxxx chapter 1 . 8/20/2011
A well thought out one shot. The second to last paragraph was particularly good. The fact that the sex gave them comfort but didn't change anything in the grand scheme of things rings true; fitting just after the battle where there is many changes.
| Joda chapter 1 . 8/20/2011
I love your story. It's so sweet and kind of sad. I wish you would write a sequel in which harry and draco would get together ;)
| AlineDaryen chapter 1 . 8/19/2011
Well done. Their desperation was nearly tangible and it was not just a mindless and loveless act, it really seemed absolutely necessary. I like smut with sense!