Reviews for Yamanaka Naruto
May chapter 4 . 4/20/2016
It is good. Good luck with the reright.
MemberXlll chapter 2 . 7/28/2015
Keep up with the chapters that's all I can really say good job
MemberXlll chapter 1 . 7/27/2015
I like where this story is going just one question how did Naruto learn the shadow clone technique did the events with mizuki still happen because that only happened because Naruto failed the exam
darkynstars chapter 1 . 5/9/2014
Ooo when are you planning to rewrite your story?
Your idea of Inoichi adopting him is great! I love it!
SpectreShepard chapter 4 . 7/12/2013
When do you think you'll post the first chapter of the rewrite?
SpectreShepard chapter 1 . 7/11/2013
Just stumbled upon your story because another author asked me to read his and it's based off of this one. Your story is awesome by the way. I've only read chapter one so far, but right now I have nothing to really complain about. Writer to writer, would you mind reading and reviewing my story for me. Again, awesome story.
Elder Sibling chapter 3 . 6/30/2013
What's this?
Aside from adopting naruto to the yamanaka, you just follow the canon. not creative
xaburame15 chapter 4 . 6/26/2013
I thought this was another chapter lol,I was like wow she updated her Yamanaka naruto story right after I did! xD I can't wait for the rewrite to come out
xaburame15 chapter 3 . 6/24/2013
Overall I liked your story,but I felt like somethings could've been different like when Naruto told everyone that he held the kyuubi I felt like their reactions were not shocked or anything and you don't show their reactions lol, also I feel like since Naruto has a mother he wouldn't be as short as he in canon he'd still be short but not the shortest atleast the same height as kiba since hes not just eating ramen(I assume) You said in chapter 2(I think) that Naruto uses mind jutsu for interrogation why didn't he interrogate the demon brothers since it would've gave them valueable information and change a lot lol but I like it
dragonvx2 chapter 1 . 4/10/2013
nice chapter love it new and fresh
Rychan6 chapter 3 . 2/10/2013
that chapter was funny
KyuubiNaruto4444 chapter 3 . 12/31/2012
you could keep them alive and have haku as a female to be paired p with naruto
jizang chapter 3 . 10/7/2012
Please Update soon
HaloGebieter chapter 1 . 8/6/2012
Are you shure that is Ino's mother and not Shikamaru's? XDDDDD really like it so far (end of ch1)
i R.A.B.B.I.T chapter 3 . 4/26/2012
I like this story very cute brother/sister relations. And I like that you put Inuzuka on team seven. The third chapter seemed a bit rushed at the end though.
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