You're writing again! Really made my day!

This is a fantastic start- it's so well-written, for one thing, and you've portrayed the characters really well! I can imagine James and Sirius fighting a lot- even when they're best friends...

And I love the relationship between Remus and his parents. I can see how they'd be protective over him after the attack.

Amazing- thank you for coming back! It was you who inspired me to start writing in the first place!

I love the interactions of all the kids. I love that James and Sirius were fighting! That made me giggle. Poor Remus feels so alienated from everyone. I almost thought he was going to be friends with Severus for a moment, but of course its not to be. The characters are delightful, and already spot-on to how they are described in the books!

I'm interested in Remus's family too. You hinted at a few things like his fathers reaction, which I definitely want to hear more of. Also, what about his sibling? He/she wasn't present at his send-off...I like that his mother had done so much "research" on the magic world and werewolves, and that she encouraged him to go even though she really didn't want him too.

Can't wait for the next chapter!

This is really good. I love the Harry Potter books, and it will be interesting to read about Lupin and the rest as children. He and Sirius were some of my favorite adult characters from the series. You've done a great job so far keeping everyone in character. _

Oh my goodness I had LITERALLY just finished re-reading We That Are Young and Shall Never See So Much and was contemplating their amazingness when I saw your name in my inbox and about had a heart attack. If a storm hadn't knocked out our electricity at precisely that moment I would have read it then and there, despite that it was like 2 am when I saw it. I am SO EXCITED that you are writing again! I love every word of your Fullmetal Alchemist stories and if this chapter is any indication I'm going to love this story just as much! Remus is my absolute favorite HP character, and if there's anyone I would trust to write his story well it would be you. I cannot wait to read further on this story! (Also, I am going to insert here a shameless desperate plea to continue Shall Never See So Much. It really is one of the most wonderful things I've ever read and I seriously almost cried the first time I realized it wasn't finished.) Either way, I'm thrilled you're writing again! Can't wait for more. :)