Reviews for Unnecessary Guilt
Cloudy to Night chapter 5 . 8/29/2011
well, i'll be honest, sorry if this hurt u! sorry! _

i like a few part of da story, it's funny. but i felt hard to catch da story, most of it in chapter 1, and chapter 2 till 5 is funny and maybe u should put the person's POV, but, great job, it's funny and just 2 remind u 'bout da Disclamer thingy, thx 4 writing it, it's funny. good luck 4 writing the next chappy, can't wait~~