|Reviews for The Robbery|
| AkiraNatsume chapter 1 . 2/14/2012
Awe, he got worried... Lol! :P
| sami1010220 chapter 1 . 12/26/2011
| sneakysnakes chapter 1 . 8/20/2011
Your story was good but your errors were distracting.
The word is presence not presents; covered not covert; not non but neither of the two men are just a few of the obvious errors. There were others that were perhaps just typos. It is a shame to ruin a fine story with these mistakes. I hope you try another story. Good Luck