Reviews for Enough Trouble for a Lifetime
SecretlyAGryffindor chapter 7 . 9/9/2011
Hey! This was a great chapter! I love how Teddy's hair turned green! :) And Hermione's reaction to waiting for the letters, so typical her! haha

And I am so jealous that you are just starting school next week! I have been for three weeks already!
Deletedaccount8373 chapter 6 . 8/28/2011
yes, yes and yes! excellent, I love the bits where harry saves ginny and also is mad when they try and hurt her. Very very awesome!
SecretlyAGryffindor chapter 6 . 8/28/2011
Great chapter :) I would be distracted with Pottermore too!If my stupid email would come. haha. Update soon!
Dragonclaw17 chapter 5 . 8/25/2011
I liked this chapter, and can't wait to find out more about this death eater.
keep it up:)
trtldx123 chapter 5 . 8/24/2011
I feel like there should have be more added to this chapter but its okayy, update soon! :)
SecretlyAGryffindor chapter 5 . 8/24/2011
WOO an update! :) It was good! I really enjoyed it!
xx-crispy-mnms-lover-xx chapter 4 . 8/24/2011
Looking forward to more :)
trtldx123 chapter 4 . 8/23/2011
Oh snappp, haha! Great chapter! Update soon! :)
SecretlyAGryffindor chapter 4 . 8/23/2011
Ahhh! Cliffhanger! NO FAIR! haha, this is really good, though it moves a little quick, so I would try slowing it down a little, it gets slightly confusing at parts. But other than that it is really good! (and sorry, tumblr cut off my messaging for an hour! GAH! I hope you like The Makings of Forever :P)
trtldx123 chapter 3 . 8/22/2011
Good chapter, super nervous for Hermione! Haha, update soon!
Annie chapter 3 . 8/22/2011
This story made me cry so hard! When Teddy turned his hair black and his eyes green, I was bawling. Thank you so much for this story.
Bernardus chapter 1 . 8/22/2011
I have read the first three Chapters and enjoy them.

The sentence in Chapter One reads a bit awkwardly.

"Harry would no longer let people step in front for his protection, and take the numerous bullets firing at him."

'Harry would no longer let people protect him, stepping in front of him to take the numerous bullets fired at him." might read a little better. And maybe lose the "numerous". Just a thought…

Also, stylistically, you precede quite a few "and"s/"but"s with commas. Works sometimes but should be rare rather than common.

You use "materialize" - US spelling but later "realising" and "realised", more UK spelling (I know it isn't absolute and there's some cross-usage).

The intent of this criticism is constructive. I hope you take it that way.
Nicole chapter 2 . 8/22/2011
Ahhh these are so good! I love them! Pleeeease write more chapters to it soon! :) I'm extremely impressed. ;) xx
jfgoafgnaergouhviofdegb4 chapter 2 . 8/21/2011
Awh! I love it! Especially the end. It was a very sweet moment between Andromeda and Harry. Please update soon! Outstanding job.:)
Dragonclaw17 chapter 2 . 8/21/2011
Oh my god. I love this story. The whole time I tried not to cry, but at the end I just couldnt help it.
This is amazing, you are a great writer:)
update soonn
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