Reviews for Running Parallel
meixel chapter 18 . 7/17/2013
Wow! I just shake my head when I read your stories. They are so amazingly and beautifully written. They add to the series and take it to a much deeper and broader level. It's rare (and insprirational) to see that. I'm happy when people can write a ficlit that embellishes a scene or better yet, gives the reader another episode of a favorite series. Yours transforms the series and puts the reader so deeply in touch with the characters' feelings while hitting on such emotionally charged themes. The images are so vivid too - I could see little Heywood Kirk in pre-Depression era overalls in this farm community sitting on the porch with a very haggard Tony.

And what a sad historical story. Thanks for the call out and considering my suggestion. What a very sad story. We think of things like this happening only today, but clearly mankind has a history of this.

I thought...I had put you and the story on 'alert', but I didn't see this until today when I went on a surfing break. So thank you! And to the other TT writers - I'm so happy to see new material! It's been a while since I checked over here. I will definitely get caught up.
angelolady chapter 9 . 7/8/2013
The atmosphere you create of endless endurance in the Tunnel makes me {{shiver}} in sympathy.
EveningInHornersCorners chapter 8 . 7/5/2013
Brilliant! The passage about his first time alter serving was very poignant. I always liked to think of him as a nice Catholic boy.
EveningInHornersCorners chapter 19 . 7/5/2013
"...her Lancelot and Gawain in shining armour, one with her heart and the other as a sister loves her brother." I absolutely love that line...such wonderful imagery...

What a beautiful piece..you've done it again.
Rotary Dial Writer chapter 14 . 6/24/2013
Wow. This is heavy... But you can pull it off, being such a good writer...

Could you do a one-shot involving the woman Tony saved from going down with the ship in the first episode? What was her name? Angela or something...
The Malt Shopper chapter 15 . 6/23/2013
One of the best chapters yet... Your writing is so deep and poignant. It jumps out at me above all the rest...
EveningInHornersCorners chapter 11 . 6/22/2013
This is an amazing chapter...the way you describe the event over and over, each time differently, must have taken a lot of work. I commend you...
EveningInHornersCorners chapter 14 . 6/22/2013
One of my favorite chapters. I love that every word is so well-chosen, and very compelling, at that. I have to smile through my tears, so to speak, when I read this. So very bittersweet...Nicely done!
EveningInHornersCorners chapter 16 . 6/22/2013
I really loved this chapter; so beautifully melancholy, really tapping into their deepest feelings. Wonderful.
EveningInHornersCorners chapter 13 . 6/22/2013
Okay, I teared up reading this. How amazingly poignant...I've read good writing before, but this is just so perfectly compelling...
EveningInHornersCorners chapter 4 . 6/22/2013
Wonderful! I love the comparison: carved in stone or written in water. You are so gifted; the eloquence and beauty your words have are things I can only hope to achieve...
EveningInHornersCorners chapter 3 . 6/22/2013
Lovely. The perfect last line. And I love expanding my historical horizons with this...
EveningInHornersCorners chapter 2 . 6/22/2013
I loved this chapter...I could picture everything so well. The quote was so perfectly chosen...
EveningInHornersCorners chapter 1 . 6/22/2013
Such a beautiful, stunning piece...a true gem...
Freedom4America4ever chapter 1 . 6/5/2013
I love every single one of your one-shots in this story! Which episode did you get your story picture from?
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