Reviews for Straws
Munkeyfump20 chapter 1 . 11/12
Oh so sweet thanks for the very good read
ChristalSteele chapter 1 . 9/12/2011
Bwahahaha... Nice Jane would so do that. I can see this being a one shot but it does lend itself to having at least a second chapter nothing earth Shattering but maybe breakfast.
xDeletedxx chapter 1 . 8/25/2011
This is incredible! Brilliantly written :)
Kuhlama chapter 1 . 8/24/2011
:) Well done !

Very sweet.
janesbiotch chapter 1 . 8/22/2011
I love this will there chapter two
Allie9 chapter 1 . 8/22/2011
So totally Jane and Lisbon! :D
Arianna Elizabeth Jackson chapter 1 . 8/21/2011
ohhh that Jane :) That was really good and I'm wondering if there was a sequel yet its so well written that there dosn't need to be
MeltedChocoButton chapter 1 . 8/21/2011
"Special Crimes Unit: Narnia"-Hilarious. It's only a matter of time before they run out of actual places.

Very enjoyable esp. the sparky banter. I was hoping he'd deliberately got her to pick the short straw so the ending was lovely.
Wldwmn chapter 1 . 8/21/2011
This was really cute. And Special Crimes Unit: Narnia made me seriously grin! Fun story!
MissDonniex chapter 1 . 8/21/2011
loved the story...thank you for sharing
Amri91 chapter 1 . 8/20/2011
Ahh, the ending was GENIUS! Loved the one-shot.
Brown Eyes Parker chapter 1 . 8/20/2011
I'm going to follow this because I feel there is more to this story. Promising beginning though.
funnygirlOoObroadwaybaby chapter 1 . 8/20/2011
I know I told you but I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH. it is probably one of my favourites I've ever read. Thank you for being amazing.