|Reviews for The Race|
| gemstone108 chapter 2 . 11/14/2011
well...that wasnt the BEST chapter ever. It could have been longer and i didnt really like the ending. It would have been nice to have Elvis win and maybe prove that they are both equaly good.
Again, this is just some advice and you dont have to take it. I still like your writing, But you would probably get more reviews if your stories had more detail and depth. :)
| AnthonyAngrywolf chapter 2 . 11/11/2011
"I win and you lose once again, Elvis!"
| AnthonyAngrywolf chapter 1 . 11/11/2011
Yes there is. I'm still trying to think about it, you know, how it would go. It's going to take a while. But don't worry, I will make it.
| gemstone108 chapter 1 . 11/8/2011
is there gonna be another chapter that shows the race?