|Reviews for Dear Helen|
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/25/2013
"Now come out and have your yearly physical before the Big Guy resorts to taking your door off of the hinges." This, honestly, just cracked me up. I can see Helen trying to hide from the inevitable, and then later being restrained (as to keep her from attacking him to get away), and dragged off, complete with angry look on her face, by the Big Guy. It would be hilarious. :)
Good job on the writing, though. Only one thing: seperate the different letters somehow. Whether by putting in a line or something else, they just need to have something between them to show when there's a switch to a new piece. Otherwise, it seems pretty good.
| ExplosiveRanga95 chapter 1 . 9/20/2011
The first letter from Helen's mother was my favourite! It was absolutely beautiful! A very touching collection,though the last two made laugh a bit :P Great work!
| T-man626 chapter 1 . 8/21/2011
Too funny, particularly the last one.