|Reviews for Take a Seat|
| Catrimc chapter 7 . 12/8/2014
It is amazing to me how you can take a minor character and make them real, someone I care about, and of whom I want to know more. You are a very good wordsmith.
| Roseanna chapter 7 . 11/1/2014
I really enjoyed reading your story!
Your writing style is excellent and I think you portrayed Sam, Dean and Victor really well.
Awesome work! :)
| NogadamoBhitia chapter 7 . 9/23/2014
I enjoyed this story but you need to go through it and proofread it for word use. Spell check will not flag misspellings when the error is a real word. Like tiered instead if tired. My fingers don't keep up with my brin, so I know what I'm talking about. Please keep writing.
| authorwannabe101 chapter 7 . 8/19/2014
This was really well written! I found it awhile ago, but I headed back and am reviewing it now. Anyway, definitely a different approach to the Henrickson stories, but I really enjoyed it.
| karonkgb chapter 7 . 7/22/2014
Henricksen POV Is realistic, showing his amazement he was as against his will the brother's humanity touch him.
Henricksen faced a blood-mad Dean eager to pull out sharp carving knives and found instead a sane guy as good as any cop hit the gut.
Plot, suggestion, being true to character, especially highlighting the difference in Sam and Dean is not easy to write and your story is readable and intriguing. Plus, I do not want to EVER give Sam the idea I have insulted Jess.
| g6hj chapter 2 . 5/22/2014
Another brilliant chapter. My favourite parts were:
1. Dean finding the folder.
2. Victor saying that Dean looks like a mama's favourite boy.
3. Dean possibly sullying the bed with ketchup.
| g6hj chapter 1 . 5/22/2014
Oh...OH! We NEED more stories like this about Victor. He was such an awesome character...why don't more people write about him like this?
I think I've read the beginning to this story before (maybe) but I don't think I reviewed it. Which is terribly remiss of me because this story is BRILLIANT!
Probably my favourite part was Sam using Victor's cell phone to call the FBI and find out some info.
| Lachriel chapter 7 . 3/26/2014
This story is awesome. The grammar kind of reads like English isn't your native language though. If you haven't already (I realize this is one of your older fics) you might think about getting a beta reader to help with that. Hope you continue writing. I'm looking forward to reading the rest of your stories.
| Katlover98 chapter 7 . 2/16/2014
This is so AWESOME! On to the next story!
| sapphireswimming chapter 7 . 7/22/2013
Awesome job. I really liked the way you ended this one. Now Henricksen is starting to change his mind about a couple of things. :)
Now I can't wait to take a look at these sequels!
| sapphireswimming chapter 6 . 7/22/2013
Oh whoa oh whoa oh whoa.
*runs to the next chapter*
| sapphireswimming chapter 5 . 7/22/2013
Seeing Henricksen's hypotheses on this whole thing is really funny when he's coming in with such set ideas about who they are and what the world is like.
Loved that they said that last line in unison! XD
| sapphireswimming chapter 4 . 7/22/2013
Well that was an intense chapter. I really liked Dean's revelation about the demon and how Henricksen is trying to put the pieces together and finally realizes that something must be going on because you /can't/ fake a nightmare. Of course all this talk about Jessica would send Sam back to having bad dreams. Also, the bit about realizing just how well Sam can play Dean was good.
Might want to watch a few misspelled words and tense changes and stuff if you ever go back to edit this story. ;)
| sapphireswimming chapter 3 . 7/22/2013
Oh whoa. What a cliffhanger ending. Oh, that's awful. No wonder Sam exploded. Ouch.
| sapphireswimming chapter 2 . 7/22/2013
Heheh. Interesting build-up. I liked how Henricksen was sure the killer in Dean would leap out as soon as Sam was gone. Instead, he starts asking questions about the double in his file.