Extraordinarily overwrought. Good beginning, but ultimately lost through meandering prose.

Thanks for writing.

Beautifully written, poignant. Thank you for sharing. Your method of delivery was masterful.

Wow wow wow wow wow wow and wow

Very nice story

I understand. For what was lost, is found again. Finally, our heroes can find the rest they deserve, not in life, but in death. I enjoyed the story. Thank you.

I really enjoyed your story.

Weird.

Overstayed its welcome, stopped being mysterious and intriguing, became pretentious and verbose instead

this was some absolutely boring shit. appreciated the fights but they are fucking wasted in this mess.

Very well written and gripping, but a little too nihilistic for my tastes.

Just found your fic and it was intense and beautiful all in one. Wish there was a happier outcome, poor Harry and Hermione ;(

so he split his own soul like voldemort did and and made dumbles his horcrux? then hermione split her soul and made insane-from-first-horcrux-harry her horcrux and then all horcruxes were burned and then fawkes took away probably-insane- from-horcrux-making-hermione?

though i liked all the soul talk, it was awesome, a bit confusing ending, where did dumbledore come from, will hermione go insane

2nd reading of this, and I still don’t have a clue on what’s going on

What a twist

You hold the grip perfectly