Reviews for The Prisoner's Cipher |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Was there a point to this story ? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I had a feeling this was not going to be a happy ending. Thank you for writing and I hope real life permirs you .to to engage in more fanfiction writing in the near future. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Gave off a kind of Jekyll and Hyde feel with the duality and everything, I liked it. Thanks for writing the story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So far this is very interesting. |
![]() ![]() sometihing something conlanging something. |
![]() ![]() Pretty damn good. And How Hannibal Lector of you :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is just "A Know it all" story don't interest me a bit |
![]() ![]() ![]() None of us are immune to falling into permanent darkness. If we have faith we might struggle with atonement and guilt. We may rise to make amends, or give into despair. Sometimes we become a true monster which no regret can ever touch. Harry needed Hermione's faith and goodness to end both the 'heroes' of their war. Heroes are human after all and war leaves much darkness to fester in it's wake. Well written story. It left me sad. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. I'm pretty lost with what happen in the third memory |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow sounds mysterious |
![]() ![]() ![]() Parseltongue? Or is it too easy? Ah, runic language created... Why is Harry dead? Why couldn't Dumbledore-half-Harry re-unite with warrior-Harry into one complete soul? Even if Hermione had to be used as catalyst, why couldn't everything be repaired that was broken? Careless. You remind me how reading an incantation in a book is not sufficient information to use it; side-effects, both short-term and long-term, have to be considered. Thank you. Good day, good night, and good luck. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. That was... intense is about the only way I can put it. It had me intrigued and riveted from the start right to the last word. I'd like to take the time though to reiterate the main point of the anonymous reviewer MrsH: it is a shame to see an otherwise great story marred by basic errors in spelling and grammar. Every so often, it would just jar me out of my immersion. I don't expect everyone to be grammatical perfectionists, but that's where a good editor would come in handy. Polishing up theses problems would add a new level of quality to your work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() raw, intense, and utterly absorbing. kudos. |
![]() ![]() Er, so he spends years coming up with this plan to Dave himself and then kills himself when it succeeds? I'm a bit confused. |
![]() ![]() ![]() absolutely brilliant writing. A true fan fiction masterpiece. |