|Reviews for A Passing Glance|
| KalikaStorm chapter 1 . 7/22/2013
Sweet story, made me smile :)
*goes to look and see if you've written anything that follows on from this*
| SorchaCahill chapter 1 . 9/13/2011
This story reminds me of just how much I love the Fem!Hawke/Sebastian pairing. I love the internal conflict that Sebastian experiences, and how he's somewhat clueless about his true feelings towards Hawke. I also like how you portrayed Hawke, making her a strong character but still likeable. I'm not a fan of Mary Sues, and too often I see Hawke written as one. Thanks for sharing this!
| kaorimaiko chapter 1 . 9/12/2011
I loved this story, I thought maybe it started off slow but it really showed the evolving romance of hawk and sebastian very well. :) great job! If only the actual game were this way...
| DigiNyxx chapter 1 . 9/3/2011
This is a really good story! I thoroughly enjoyed it. I particularly liked the little smattering of Gaelic that Sebastian uses. Fantastic work.
| Xhian chapter 1 . 8/24/2011
"Bethany wasn't a blood mage but the Templars considered her to be an apostate."
I just want to correct this, Bethany IS an apostate (so is Hawke if he/she is a mage). Any mage outside of the Circle or fled from the Circle is considered an apostate. Same with Anders. Being an apostate does not make you a blood mage.
Hopefully that helps.
Anyway, this could be the longest one shot I've read. I enjoyed it. Hope you write more SebastianxHawke.