Reviews for Broken
Rhonda Roo chapter 4 . 9/12/2011
Loved it...really loved it...can't wait for more!
Cfhonan chapter 4 . 9/12/2011
This is fantastic. Can't wait to read the next chapter! I hope we get some e/o soon. :)
Guest chapter 4 . 9/12/2011
She should totally meet his kids !
Little Kakau chapter 4 . 9/12/2011
too sweet! LOVED IT!
Mercy chapter 4 . 9/12/2011
Lovely
kezia chapter 4 . 9/12/2011
Don't come a knockin' if the sedan is a rockin'! OLIVIA. GET BONED.
The.Ocean.Shadow chapter 3 . 9/10/2011
I love this! More soon please? (:
LifeLoveLoathing chapter 3 . 9/8/2011
I LOVE it! I love the instantaneous chemistry between Elliot and Olivia. I love that he wanted to come in and help her with her mother. I love that he wants to know the deepest, most terrible parts of her life. I love that they ALREADY feel what we all know is coming. I just wonder how long they can hold out on this sexual tension... Can't wait to read the next chapter!
E chapter 3 . 9/6/2011
AGGGH! More pleassseeee! This was a really good chapter. I think I will have trouble waiting for the next one...
Little Kakau chapter 3 . 9/6/2011
Christina, this fic is great! Loving more each chapter
BensonStabler chapter 3 . 9/6/2011
Jellybean! Oh girl you kill me! He was gonna kiss her...he was I know it...ahhhh did i mention you kill me...and what was with Serena eyeing Elliot up and down...i wish the next line was her thinking "I'd tap that" LMAO! ahhh well mama Benson has good taste! Great chap! xoxoxox Lynn
PushTheButtton chapter 3 . 9/6/2011
'Unfortunately, his body and his heart didn't agree with his mind.'

Elliot, Elliot. She hot.. you hot.. just... *sigh* I won't go there.. lol..

An update will be anticipated...that is all. ;)
dana-maru1 chapter 3 . 9/6/2011
Great now you've added tension on top of heartbreak, you're killing me wumman lol

Love it though :) x
Cfhonan chapter 3 . 9/6/2011
I wish we had seen something like this on the show. Poor olivia she will never be truly be free from serena. Can't wait to read more.
Kezia chapter 3 . 9/6/2011
...They're gonna bone. Hot baby detectives gettin' it ON in the back seat of the sedan.
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