Reviews for Broken
E chapter 1 . 8/21/2011
Ooooh! Love this! Especially how you integrate the italicized parts. It makes it unique and interesting. cannot wait for an update! Thanks for writing!
dana-maru1 chapter 1 . 8/21/2011
Aww so want to hug little Liv, those flashback bits are heartbreaking. Can't wait to see where this goes
Cfhonan chapter 1 . 8/21/2011
Loved it! The parts with Olivia as a little girl were so sad but I always like little looks into her childhood. Can't wait to see where this goes!
Jessica-loves-Katie chapter 1 . 8/21/2011
This was incredibly invoking!

The part about little Olivia having to wash the filth of was heart wrenching!

Please update soon. I'm looking forward to it! X
maigonokaze chapter 1 . 8/21/2011
Nice concept. I'm interested to see how you put the two of them together from the start, because you're right that that is something we never really got to see in the show.
ItsALifesJourney chapter 1 . 8/21/2011
I love.. More, more, more. Oh yea, way to kill my little hearty heart with the bar scene and bb Olivia wanting to wash her skin clean or something to look like her mama! Good Job. Like I said. MORE!
BensonStabler chapter 1 . 8/21/2011
Jellybean! Lovin it...they already want to jump each other after meeting 5 minutes ago! I feel it! great job love! xoxoxox Lynn
Elliotandoliviababies chapter 1 . 8/21/2011
Sounds like I have read this tory before but I will continue to read.
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