|Reviews for Fifty|
| FlamingKitten2 chapter 1 . 8/11/2013
| Kyro Fan chapter 1 . 2/4/2012
Excellent work - just one quibble, though.
"Kryptonite to Superman was ice to John, and the way Kitty made him feel, she might as well have been made of it." This... doesn't sound quite right. Perhaps: "Ice was to John as Kryptonite was to Superman, and the way Kitty made him feel, she might as well have been made of it" would have worked better? :)
| XxNeONxX chapter 1 . 8/25/2011
I swear I heard myself whisper "beautiful" to the empty bedroom after reading this...
| ticktock22 chapter 1 . 8/22/2011
Aww. How sweet and tragic. Gotta love Kyro! Great story... or stories I guess.
| Alicia chapter 1 . 8/21/2011
Beautiful...even the sad/grief ones...beautiful...love this pairing.
| Auluna chapter 1 . 8/21/2011
Never shall I lose my desire to smack John for being a twat! But that's why we love him, isn't it? I'll be here waiting for more
| scribblemyname chapter 1 . 8/21/2011
Breathlessly beautiful. Favorite is all.