Reviews for State Lines
IsItRealySuchADeepCut chapter 3 . 3/12/2012
please go on with it it's great
Silver Lady chapter 3 . 10/24/2011
The last line...All I can say is SQUEE! XD
Mali Bear's Buddy chapter 3 . 10/15/2011
The fact that they're hot and sweaty from the heat being broken should not be sexy...but reading the way Dean is eyeing Jo and thinking about taking her on the table is incredibly hot. Let me take a moment to soak that in. *closeseyes* Yep. I was right. That's definitely hot! ;)

I love the comparison of Jo to young Mary. Both women are ass-kickers and I think it's very fitting for Dean to fall for someone like his mom. That Jo makes Dean think about things he never thought he could have makes my 'shipper heart sing.

The picture of her in his wallet...oh... *sigh* Yeah. That was lovely. Made even more perfect by how casual he was about it and how he'd used it to give other women the brush off. That makes me melt. It's the little details that are often ignored that breathe realism into a story and really sell a higher level of feeling and impact. This was that kind of detail. The thing that gives just that little punch to knock you over. Perfection.

Keep 'em coming. Can't (but will) wait for more!
abbyli chapter 1 . 10/12/2011
Me likeeeee!
Digital-Dragon-Master chapter 3 . 10/10/2011
Oh, my GOD, I love it. He has a picture of her in his wallet. The first thing he noticed was her smile and her right hook. AH, perfect.

Also, I am so glad someone else has the idea of Dean and Jo having two little girls, I have always loved it and it has never ever left my mind.

Um yeah, this was going to be more technical but I have been dissolved to flailing hands and this is awesome.

Digital-Dragon-Master

"Ari"
cheekymonster2 chapter 3 . 10/10/2011
SO sweet and the ending was a real nice preview for the rest of the story!
b chapter 3 . 10/10/2011
beautiful thing. Please continue
angeleyenc chapter 3 . 10/9/2011
plz update! great fic hun! ;D
xSimplyMissy chapter 3 . 10/9/2011
Yay! Love this update! I find it very hard to hate anything you post! Lol I thought the idea of the pic of Jo in Dean's wallet was a really cute and different idea that I have never read before! I just can't seem to get enough of this couple! (: I also really enjoyed the last part about the future pictures in his wallet, that pulled at my heart! Love!

Can't wait for the next update! And maybe a return of Sam...(;

Missy
SaceSage chapter 3 . 10/9/2011
I love the imagery in this story! Jo's at her best, hard where she needs to be, but soft at the same time. I especially love this line from ch. 3 "The very fact that he entertained these uncharacteristically sentimental and nausea inducing thoughts led him to believe that in every way imaginable, Jo was different to all the other women he had met."

I think chapter three's my favorite so far! I grinned all the way through it.
Silverspoon chapter 3 . 10/9/2011
Sera Gamble : "It's light relief."

No, this here was light relief, executed perfectly, giving the reader hope and lovely accompanying warm fuzzies before you slap on that angst thick with a trowel again.

Loved it, as I do the whole premise of this story. My favourite bit was the end focus on the wallet, because with that we knew everything would be ok; Sam will be back, and one day the brothers will both be happy, in your verse at least, and as a reader I would never ask for more. xxx
DeanWinchester'sGrl chapter 2 . 9/21/2011
WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS TO ME? This story is all kinds of perfect! I am an emotional mess right now because i'm never gonna get to see this happen.
Natali chapter 2 . 9/13/2011
honestly, when i first started reading i didn't think i would finish it, let alone like it... but i seriously loved it! i liked this side of dean and jo, and i liked your way of portraying their relationship..

great work!

hope there are more chapters to come. :)
xSimplyMissy chapter 2 . 9/12/2011
Yay! I love this update! How is possible that Dean is even more adorable when he is sick! Love him! (: and Jo taking care of him was cute! I'm loving all the fluff! Especially the exchange of "I love you". My heart does break for Dean though now that Sam is gone. The scene with the two brothers in the store was very bittersweet!

Can't wait to read more! (:

Missy
Silverspoon chapter 2 . 9/12/2011
You pulled it out of the bag again, doody. You're always a pleasure to beta for (even if your damn WP spacing drives me nuts), because I know that what I will get to read before everyone else will make me feel priviledged.

Sick! Dean was definitely how I would have figured him to be, and I think you made the right choice with Jo's major. I am certain that will be a running joke with Dean now though, lol. His own personal nurse.

This was a sweet chapter, and that definitely fit. The boys in the drugstore were a nice way to touch on Dean's still raw greif, but also to show that Jo is helping him heal. Loved it. You don't bog the reader down with negative emotion, instead you bolster the spirit and leave us with a smile.
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