|Reviews for Crash|
| Mangafn chapter 1 . 4/5/2013
ur storyyyy is excellent! awwwww so sweet of him taking anzu to the ball n the last sentence IS SUPERB... anzu a paramedic- tht ws a very nice idea i ddnt expect ths while reading the storyyy
n p.s i like the part where seto 'silently apologising to those he had hurt'.
lv ths pairing
| Nevergonnafindme chapter 1 . 9/23/2012
sexay kaiba omg. if he whispered that into my ear hnnnggg
| Luna chapter 1 . 1/7/2012
That was sweet. i liked the end best
But if I think about it the beginning is as good.
I mean helloooooo Seto is practically dying out there and what is he doing? Sneering! I am amazed he has breath for that XD
Well good that Anzu was on her way huh?
I am a Parametic. Is one of my favorite sentences XD
I like the pairing Anzu x Seto. I don't know it just fits. Maybe because they are so different.
You know what is another of my favorite parts? When Mokuba 'left strict instructions' XD This sounds like an or. Ask her or I am the person to make you regret it XD
And the end sentence is sweet. Seto Kaiba really got over himself
It was time XD
One more thing. idiots exist all over the world and the best way to deal with them ist to ignore them. Don't let this person I already forgot the name get you down ok? I think it was a sweet story. Anzu as she normally is and even Seto wasn't out of character. That is the problem with most stories Seto is too sappy XD But you hadn't the problem.
I don't know if the person with the two reviews before me had a bad day or what ever, just don't take that too seriously like I said idiots are everywhere. And if he isn't capable of writing a decent review with an argument why your story is that bad, than you shouldn't consider his opinion. And for your first try it was pretty good
| Kemmeyz chapter 1 . 10/4/2011
Cunt faced, u can't write yr way outta paperbag, whore!
| Kemmeyz chapter 1 . 10/4/2011
You racial nigger bitch, you belong in a straight jacket. I'll fuck u all night long, whore. I'll fuck yr mouth in front of yr father. You'd like that, won't u cunt faced? My fingers up your tight ass, your mouth around my cock, sucking. I'll stick a screwdriver up your cunt so far, so hard... you'll scream, bleeding all over. I'll nail yr black cunt bitch. You'll enjoy it, won’t u? I'll tear off your clothes, cut your cunt with a razor, and watch while twenty other men jerk their cum off on u. And then I’ll fuck yr mother. You know why? Because, your story ain’t worth shit douche bag. You fucking loser. Your story is shit. Go kill yrself waste of space, scum of the earth, bitch.
| kataragurl27 chapter 1 . 9/16/2011
i like it
| zenbon zakura chapter 1 . 9/4/2011
lol he didnt see the tree ROFLAMO
| icegoddess chapter 1 . 8/28/2011
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.!that was so cute. you should have added more but its fine i'lljust makeup an ending for it in my head
| Fire Caster chapter 1 . 8/26/2011
AAAAHHHHHH! LOVED IT!
| essaddf chapter 1 . 8/23/2011
I read The old version a few years ago. You really did a good job with the rewrite!
| Sessho-Kagome4ever chapter 1 . 8/22/2011
| jessi chapter 1 . 8/21/2011
Excellent story! Too bad it is only a one shot, I wanted more...:-)
| Anshu chapter 1 . 8/21/2011
I heaved a sigh in relief when Anzu said that she was the paramedic. You’ve charted out the accident scene very nicely. I can imagine Kaiba as a rash driver... he likes his thrills, doesn’t he? Good thing he’s saved and things worked out in the end. I also like how you revealed that Anzu upon failing to secure an admission in Julliard branched out to become a paramedic. Yeah, she’s one strong girl. This is a beautiful one-shot. I enjoyed it immensely. Thank you for writing and sharing it!