Reviews for One Miffed Delivery Boy
Blasian Malaysian chapter 15 . 8/12/2023
Training UpgradeBJ?!
Guest chapter 16 . 2/9/2022
"Just make sure you never lose that ball" - Goku to his son
GloGang214 chapter 2 . 11/4/2021
This gohan is just an angsty cringe version.
SpiritualHuntress chapter 3 . 7/10/2021
Anyone else getting serious hiro x karmi vibes?
I mean even the ages are about right!
Panellope01 chapter 17 . 4/13/2021
Touché coz I can't explain how awesome this is.I hope to see u again dude️️️️
Panellope01 chapter 16 . 4/13/2021
I nearly let that thing come outta ma this was too touching Even for me,so touché
Panellope01 chapter 14 . 4/13/2021
I haven't watched dragon ball but I think you just explained the whole thing so no dude
Panellope01 chapter 13 . 4/13/2021
Okay,the Bulma and Vegeta thing, that's not so pretty
Panellope01 chapter 8 . 4/13/2021
OMG I love Vegeta parts and angry Gohan, nice touch.I jus hope Videl survives the shock
DG Devine Girl chapter 17 . 4/13/2021
I loved it maybe you can make new ones it was amazing 198 more. I love you️️️️
Huge props chapter 17 . 2/6/2021
Great story
Guest chapter 1 . 3/31/2019
Wtf I learned that type of ques. When I was 11
Guest chapter 12 . 2/1/2019
Oh my god. He is still dealing with some Emo bullshit.
Guest chapter 8 . 2/1/2019
And of course, we need another chapter of Emo Gohan with voices in his head. And we've got to include any headcanon we've gotten from another fanfiction, regardless of how well it fits.
Guest chapter 7 . 2/1/2019
Ah, yes. Of course we need a rapist and an incompetent Videl to make this story even better.

And Gohan is amazing. Hey, let's blow up a mountain in front of everyone. Wait, I still gotta hide my powers. So, I'm going to lie about not having fought Cell.
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