Reviews for One Miffed Delivery Boy
LeChick chapter 1 . 6/26/2014
Ha! The teachers' names brilliance.
Guest chapter 17 . 6/24/2014
Holy shit this is a good story!
Guest chapter 17 . 5/16/2014
I think you should continue this story
Blake2020 chapter 16 . 3/20/2014
Yeah goku made lol of good statement he said but any way for future fiction like unexpected majin you could make that story and make gohan a dark saiyan warrior under that wizard spell and he be powerful and fight his father that be cool? He be more powerful then vegeta went he fall to babidi and gohan a perfect victim to turn evil?
Blake2020 chapter 15 . 3/20/2014
Oh i know if i had guess it goku himself mmm cool but i know gohan be angry at him thought ?
Blake2020 chapter 14 . 3/20/2014
very interesting
Blake2020 chapter 13 . 3/20/2014
nice chapter
Blake2020 chapter 12 . 3/20/2014
Very cool he be a great Majin gohan with this anger he be more poweful then vegeta went that wizard cast his dark spell at vegeta making him a majin and i think gohan be a better one and more powerful too?
Blake2020 chapter 11 . 3/20/2014
very cool
Blake2020 chapter 10 . 3/20/2014
Very cool
Blake2020 chapter 9 . 3/20/2014
I agree with you there aboat the mushy stuff and im not fan of it either but any way good chapter?
Blake2020 chapter 8 . 3/20/2014
cool chapter
Blake2020 chapter 7 . 3/20/2014
neat chapter
Blake2020 chapter 6 . 3/20/2014
Interesting story this kind of angry gohan and be a good majin gohan if you decide to make it be worth to see it? Because i read the unexpected majin and that good story and i hope you make one of this gohan he be the perfect majin and very powerful too i hope to see that in the future? His anger be at goku for leaving him and mom and brother behind?
Blake2020 chapter 5 . 3/20/2014
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