|Reviews for Signifying Something|
| BloodColoredRose chapter 1 . 7/27/2012
why the hell didn't you get more reviews? FIVE? SERIOUSLY? this, my friend, is art. black and white ART. plain as day. as big and amazing as freakin' JUPITER, for crying out loud! not even the existence of outer-space aliens coming to take over the world can spoil this sliver of divinity. this is AMAZING!
the tone is flawless. i love how ciel is contemplating the existence of humans, using shakespeare. i haven't read much shakespeare in my rather short, human life, but i do know one thing: you use his works well. even though sebastian and ciel are lovey-dovey, they are (for the most part) still in character, which causes some trouble to other writers. but you capture them perfectly.
and, as i read another of your stories, i can't help but notice that your style is a bit different. it's like Maiden of the Moon's. but, since i love her stories as well, i can't blame you. in fact, i envy you. you're able to recreate your own style so flawlessly! you seriously have talent.
all in all, this piece is ART! FABULOUS! i absolutely love it! i seriously can't wait to read more from you.
| keela1221 chapter 1 . 6/22/2012
This was so very beautiful! thank you
| ComplicatedDisorder chapter 1 . 8/22/2011
MOOOOOOOOOOONY! -Gawks.- ... HI. 8'D
If you still by some chance remain speechless, let us join a sisterhood dedicated to this 'D But that's not likely, as I took such a long time to reply, first day of school and such and I'm sorry. ;A; But do not be sorry for not updating, I know I will think the wait was totally worth it when I read the next chapter!
Pffffffffffft. What are you talking about, your style is not only original and incredible, it is FLAWLESS. It is so you, and you have it so perfected, that only you can do it and will ever be able to do it like you do it. (I hope you aren't forced to read that again to make sense of it.) But indeed, it's so beautiful that I read your fics once for just immersing in the story and twice for seeing what you did and how you did it. xD So I kinda tried using the elements you most commonly use, though really, you have it so perfect, any imitation could NEVER come close, ever. D' But anyways, yes, I totally agree! It IS very handy to analyze what the best have done (Edgar Allan Poe ftw), and you Moony, are one of the best worthy of learning from, most definitely.
You caught it! xD It was subtle, yes; "and his eyes had all the seeming of a demon that is dreaming." I'm so happy you liked it! -Hearts- Like really. I can't put into words my squeal of happiness. Well, yes, yes I could. But that would totally make me run out of the 8584 characters I have left.
You mean that angsty scene you included in the last chapter...? Drama-ridden continuation...? ...
I mean. -Ahem.- Oh. -Cough.- Poor Sebastian and Ciel, you are so mean to them.
... HOLY BURRITOS, I DO NOT MIND WOMAN. I feel so special at the moment. If my family didn't mind gay fluff and I could show this to them, they would be so proud of me for the new link in your profile. 8''D But screw that. THANK YOU for being so wonderful.
Moony! You are more than welcome! Any time sweetheart! Know that you are loved and that we are all waiting for you to actually publish something you can SELL. You are an incredible writer and have all the capacity to take over ANY MARKET (comedy gore book ftw) you want! And you don't know how flattered I am that someone like you would say I have talent. xD I'll go write something now just because you said that. 8'D
Hm. I think this is now longer than you own review. Sorry. I got excited. 8
You too Moony, thank you for sharing your amazing stories with us!
Psssst. She said she would. -Gives popcorn.- Let us camp in front of the computer and refresh until she does. 8 And thanks for the review! xD
Thanks! I'm so happy you loved it! Thanks for telling me too! :3
| Prankster101 chapter 1 . 8/21/2011
I... am absolutely in love with this. I just posted it to my facebook as a recommended read for my friends, it's just too wonderful. 3
| Maiden of the Moon chapter 1 . 8/21/2011
...I honestly find myself a bit speechless, right now. This was such an unexpected treat- I'm having a difficult time believing what I just read. How incredibly sweet and flattering that you took the time to write this! Pathetic as it is, it makes me a bit teary to know how much you obviously care about the "Bicentennial" series... (It makes me feel a bit guilty, too; chapter four of "Hitches and Knots" isn't coming along quite as quickly as I'd hoped, eh heh... orz I feel like I've failed you. XD;;; )
But more to the point: even despite the inevitable bias I can't help but have (after all, how could I -not- love something you wrote for my little series?), I adored this story. Absolutely beautiful... You displayed a literary skill that (I'm sad to say) is becoming a rarity on this website; your word choice was excellent, the tone perfect... and the details you put into the tone! You emulated my style wonderfully; I feel like I could just slip this into the saga and no one would notice that someone else had written it! XD The fact that you can mold and tweak your style in such a way is very impressive; I hope you choose to continue exploring new styles in your other works. It's a handy skill to have. ;3
And oh, the allusions. My fangirling over that requires a paragraph of its own. Your use of Shakespeare was fantastic, of course (how did you know I love the Bard, haha? ;3), but I was even more impressed by the subtler shout-outs you included- I believe I caught a reference to "The Raven" as well? And the last line... I loved how it connected back to the original fanfic via the use of the word "turn." Just brilliant!
I really don't have anything to say in the way of critiques... though I will be honest and confess that (while I haven't had the time to do much besides make vague, brief references in "H&K,") this isn't, unfortunately, what happens after "Turn." Rather, there is a long, drama-ridden story arc prior to Sebastian and Ciel wholly and openly accepting their feelings for one another. That said, there's no way you could have known that- and what is fanfiction, if not a method to explore alternate realities? I certainly don't think that little detail makes this any less of a wonderful fanfic- not in any sense of the word.
In short, I definitely do not hate this. I love it! And I am going to save it, and fave it, and share it. I hope you don't mind! 8'D
And again, sincerely, thank you. This gift, and your support, means so much to me... I hope you continue to enjoy "Bicentennial," despite my inability to update in a reasonable amount of time. XD; Good luck on all of your future projects, as well! Though I hardly think you need luck. Not when you've got so much talent. C:
Have a wonderful night, love!
| promocat chapter 1 . 8/21/2011
i love all of moon maiden's biocent. stories(wisf she finish the wedding arc!)this fits in perfectly!