Reviews for Wings of Death
Jaslazul chapter 1 . 5/13/2012
I know I'm absurdly late, but, this is an impressive beginning. Your diction and syntax are fluid and effective, and tackled the task of information-distribution quite well. Nice job!
memebased101 chapter 1 . 8/23/2011
It's just like Dagger to run away like that without telling anyone, considering she's fooled the party several times before. Zidane is very in character, too. You caught his impulsiveness when he's in a panic.

I loved the Steiner X Beatrix moment! Those two are just adorable! And Steiner is such a worrywart!

THE SUSPENSE IS KILLING ME. What is going on? Please update soon!
fifol-fowah chapter 1 . 8/23/2011
Amazing! I feel the suspense! What is Dagger looking for? I want to know! Hurry up and update!