|Reviews for Moments|
| Slayergirl35 chapter 1 . 8/9/2013
| Harold3456 chapter 1 . 11/20/2011
Very good, I especially like how you threw in the woman who didn't stop for Barbie (the luckiest woman in this entire book). I was hoping that you'd expand more on fewer people, however, instead of just making passing mentions of made-up characters. The siituations that they found themselves in were interesting, though.
One thing: "Mrs Appleton had her foot pushed down on the gas, causing her car to reach 90 mph. She had always had a penchant for driving recklessly when the kids weren't in the car, but now she had to get back to them. The car hit the Dome and went from 90 to 0 in seconds."
The "in seconds" part irked me. It should be "instantly", or something to that effect.