Reviews for Tranquil Violence
Anj3lik chapter 10 . 5/31/2012
Absolutely love this fic. Keep working at it guys!
A-man chapter 10 . 5/30/2012
So I am either not following certain things, I am missing something, or there was a mistake? Wasn't Tien training Katie? Why would he be in the dojo meditating, I think there was a slight mistake here. Yes, you could argue he went back to the dojo, but that just doesn't make sense. Erasa's comment is also a bit off, half of the Sensei's are out on a training retreat with choice pupils...but that could easily be written off as 'off-gaurd' response becuase she was thinking only about the teachers there.

Otherwise I am really enjoying the story. The update rate is a bit disappointing, but this is definitely in the top 3 stories that are currently in progress in the DBZ genre right now. Please update soon.
withoutwingsx chapter 10 . 5/30/2012
Love it!
Books52 chapter 10 . 5/29/2012
Awwww u should had made eraser say " what kind of fool do u think I am?" then go to a sensi to repoet
lancecomwar chapter 10 . 5/29/2012
It has returned!

Yay!

More, please. :p
BandaraX99 chapter 9 . 5/18/2012
to put it simply, awesome, very interesting with an in depth view of martial arts, keep it up!
Darkness Angel-Ai chapter 9 . 4/6/2012
Incredible! Truly loved it hope to read more!
A-man chapter 9 . 3/27/2012
This is a great story. Love it.
UltimateGohan42 chapter 9 . 3/26/2012
This is an amazing story keep it up!
dcp1992 chapter 9 . 3/25/2012
Great story so far, it's going good, update soon!
LadyBlah chapter 9 . 3/24/2012
Keep up the good work! I'm still loving this story!
jh831 chapter 9 . 3/23/2012
really enjoying the story

the characters are way better in this story than in the anime/manga

the atmosphere is where it should be for a great story

the speach you had gohan give videl was a great way to end this chapter

can't wait for the next chapter
RaiStar chapter 9 . 3/22/2012
Interesting. I'll be looking foreword to more.
MadnessLover chapter 9 . 3/21/2012
Great story.
LiiMakino chapter 9 . 3/21/2012
Great! I want to see Videl improve! (:

Loved the 'dark Gohan' especially the line:

"Up here, I am a cold-blooded murderer and worse, I am a serial rapist."

That must have been scary for Videl.

If I was her, Gohan could go serial rapist on me anytime. :9

Anyhow, I didn't catch any typos or anything, it

was a good chapter, greatly written. Congrats Ri6961 and Gue22. (btw, where's Razamataz22?)

Well, anyway, still, I miss the sparks from Gh/V. Put some romance, people. lol

And keep up the amazing work TDS, I absolutely adore the work you guys been doing. (:
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