Reviews for Tranquil Violence
GoldenPiggy chapter 23 . 11/7/2014
I have just found one of my new all time favorite Dragonball Z fanfics...

Dear General, i would like you to kill Son Gohan...

... I hope not...

Cant wait for the next chapter. Team Dragon Star gets my best regards!

Guest chapter 23 . 10/27/2014
General Tao?
TheWickedTruth89 chapter 1 . 10/26/2014
Interesting idea
FeCr chapter 23 . 10/21/2014
Amazing chapter, as always. I just hope the next one doesn't take the better part of a year to get out lol.

Good luck and please please please don't abandon this story!
dbzfan the first chapter 23 . 10/20/2014
great chapter keep up the good work
maximusrexmundi chapter 23 . 10/20/2014
Well now I gotta know!
nancy103 chapter 23 . 10/20/2014
Oh man! What an updated! My mind is reeling about that letter. Dear General could mean a lot of things... General in the army, RedRibbon General...etc. Very exciting!
dcp1992 chapter 23 . 10/20/2014
Wow, nice comeback for Mark. Glad he's on the good side now, hopefully this turnaround will do some good. I wonder what Mr. Satan was up to with that letter too, I have some guesses but nothing really. It looks like 17 fond something important though. Anyway, Update soon! Can't wait to see what happens after that camera was found and with the new MArk.
crystaline mystery chapter 23 . 10/20/2014
WELL I LOVE YOUR STORY! well i am waiting for the next chapter but better to say that i am dying!
shugokage chapter 23 . 10/20/2014
Wow Mark was really impressive in this chapter and great job on this chapter!
KiwiS92 chapter 23 . 10/20/2014
Awesome chapter! Mark's development is astounding. Not only strenghtwise but also his personality. I'm just wondering how long you'll make this story. It feels to me we're getting close to the ending. I can't wait for Videls' response to Hercule's actions.
i'm iam chapter 23 . 10/20/2014
90% sure it was a request to general tao for gohan's assassination
Dyton chapter 23 . 10/20/2014
Oh my god, how could you leave it there? I want to know what was on that letter. Now I have to wait a long time before I see the next chapter. How can you be so cruel?

I think the scene between Hercule and Mark was just amazing. It was written perfectly well. I can't wait for the next chapter. Please don't make us wait so long.
ArmyWife22079 chapter 23 . 10/20/2014
I'm wondering what that letter said to piss mark off that much and added enough fuel to spark that forest fire
Lerris chapter 22 . 10/8/2014
This is not bad overall, but the bit where Mr. Satan appears at their training site and somehow shifts all the Senseis around did not seem to benefit the story. First, if her father didn't want her dating, then shifting her to another Sensei at random that is also about her age doesn't seem to make any sense. If you were going to do that, then you might as well shift to Krillan, who is about the same age as her father and thus not likely dating material. He is presumably also married to Eighteen, although she has not made an appearance for some reason. Second, while I understand Mr. Satan's goal of being disruptive, this doesn't really seem to accomplish much. If he knew who Seventeen was, then he certainly wouldn't shift her to him, and if he didn't, then again, why him? The bit with Mark waffling between what is right and what is easy was notable though...

All in all I think the best plan Mr. Satan could come up with is to perhaps somehow find evidence' that what they were learning was evil. If he can manufacture that, then his plans might all work... In fact, I think he already considered this, so perhaps it is in the future. Of course, the simple fact that the z-fighters do not particularly want credit could help him if he were to work out something. It is not as if any of them plan to mass teach students..
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