Reviews for Tranquil Violence
nancy103 chapter 26 . 4/2/2015
Good cliffhanger! Who got hit...17 or Gohan or even Mark? Exciting!
skyreal chapter 26 . 3/28/2015
eh...i like the general idea of the story as a whole but i'm not sure i can buy this latest development. i mean goku was shot at and he effortlessly avoided it when he didn't even know the traps were there. that aside i'd also like to point out if this assassin is tao, i don't think general was ever really a title he actually had...correct me if i'm wrong: i just thought he was a mercenary and that general tao was just a common mistake considering everyone's favorite chinese takeout. other than that, great work! love the story and the amount of description and detail that goes into the plot is always a plus
TheMistOfThePast chapter 26 . 3/26/2015
This was Awesome! Can't wait for the next 1
Guest chapter 26 . 3/25/2015
Is it Tao or General Blue?
Aqua Roxas chapter 26 . 3/25/2015
Tao and Satan have a past of blood.

"One day, at a bar in South City, Tao was made fun of for his hairstyle by Mr. Satan and the master of the Satan Castle, so Tao killed the master and heavily injured Mr. Satan.[5] Tao trained the young Tien Shinhan during his days with the Crane School, and was a major influence to Tien"
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Tiffany0 chapter 26 . 3/25/2015
Well, this was certainly an thrilling chapter, and I definitely have my theory about who was shot, can't wait for the update.
jomama25 chapter 26 . 3/25/2015
noooooooo! thats sad...
dbzfan the first chapter 26 . 3/25/2015
super chapter can hardly wait for the next one
Guest chapter 26 . 3/25/2015
Very exciting chapter, I have my guesses to who was shot. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Riku Uzumaki chapter 26 . 3/25/2015
Hercule must be truly desperate if he's resorting to hiring General/Mercenary Tao. Especially since they have a bad history with each other, at least from Hercule's side. Killing Hercule's martial arts master because some people from his dojo insulted his hair was probably just another Tuesday for Tao.
chaosoulg chapter 26 . 3/24/2015
Yeah.. Not really seeing how the bullet could have even hit Gohan much less hurt him. I know it's AU, but ehhhh...
Smithback chapter 26 . 3/24/2015
stressful and awesome chapter
MysticSSJTwin chapter 26 . 3/24/2015
Another great chapter for a great story. Please dont forget this story lol
Guest chapter 26 . 3/24/2015
bullets don't affect those with high ki. Goku was 12 and bullets could not even draw blood from him.
anonymous chapter 26 . 3/24/2015
How could gohan be hit AND hurt by a bullet, I mean his reaction time is kinda FTL so I guess that he was not shot and what I think is that mark was hit maybe
Anyways
Update soon
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