|Reviews for Northern Star|
| Mrs. Majere chapter 1 . 8/29/2011
Hey. I really like this story, but there are a few things you need to work on. For one, spelling and grammar check. And also, when you were describing the main character you sort of skipped between past and present tense. Other than that, I found nothing wrong with this story! I like it! Keep writing!
| The flag bearer of Elessedil chapter 1 . 8/25/2011
I only have one thing to say.
Kender, a hard thing to write on, I just think they should be a little more happy, more exited, more talkative.
I know their village was attacked, but they would find some happiness somewhere.
Tasslehoff was the only kender who knows what fear is.
Just saying, kender always seem happy.