Reviews for The Trouble With Twins
Ghanaperu chapter 1 . 11/30/2013
Aww. Sad and sweet.
Noodle Fanatic chapter 1 . 7/22/2012
This is beutiful!*sob* tears of joy
sydneysages chapter 1 . 9/18/2011
Awww, this was sooo cute!

I love the wya that it happened on the anniversary of Fred's death that he proposed, as it sort of closed it off with Fred but in a way that showed they would alwsy remember him. Additionally, I liked how she thought instantly of Ron when she mentioned nerves, which made me smile. I really did like this fic.

It was short but I liked thatas well - the proposal was simple adn nice and just eeepp!


- canonness with the book - my own word now. (10/10)

Al we know is that it happened so yeah, it could happen like this.

- how in character it is (9/10)

It was very like Angelina!

- spelling (1/1)

Allest richtig! (sorry for how short this is but yano, it's pointless filling it out with repeated OMG I LOVE THIS I find)

-grammar (1/1)

Alles gut!

-whether or not it stays in POV (1/1)

Alles in 1st!

- other things I think I should give you a mark for (1/1)

The idea to write this on the anniversary of Fred’s death was ingenious, a way to close his life off as well. I also like how you ended it, with Fred sort of ebing happy that they were together and stuff.. the thing about the sun was epical as well!

Score: 23/24- like with Reg, I’ll be sending your PM out tonight, since I only have acouple left to mark now!

Vicky xx
randoom chapter 1 . 8/29/2011
The ending of the story gave me goose bums.

So sad.
Hope-W chapter 1 . 8/22/2011
very nice! Sad and nice in the same moment