Reviews for Aether: The Arbiter's Tears
Oddments and Tweaks chapter 3 . 10/30/2011
Another good chapter! So much going on! I like how you've moved people on four years and how they've developed, your addition of new characters fitted in seamlessly too! I love the effort you go to to include a backstory for everyone, it's just making the whole tapestry richer! And im interested to hear more about this LPG group too! In short, excellent! :D
Oddments and Tweaks chapter 2 . 10/29/2011
You go into such incredible detail, you've really pulled me into the story, I love how carefully you describe each character and the way they think about things-the rescue in particular was excellent! The only thing I'd say was out of place really was after all your beautiful set up and descriptions the language of Helga really jarred, I don't know if that's just me being picky (if so im sorry and ignore me!)but it felt odd having someone speak so coarsely in such a setting. I loved it though! I can't believe you dont have more reviews! You really deserve serious praise for this story! :D
Oddments and Tweaks chapter 1 . 10/17/2011
This is a FANTASTIC start! I love how much detail you've gone into! You set the scene beautifully! I can only apologise for not reading and reviewing sooner! I can't wait to read your next chapters! :D