Reviews for Love Bites |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This was such an INCREDIBLE story. The character development . The believability. Just flawlsss |
![]() ![]() ![]() Possessive snape is yum |
![]() ![]() ![]() that was amazing, fantastic fic ! congrats |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh my god . im not crying you're crying! I was hesitant at first to wander into a werewolf SSHG because I love the pairing and love lycanthropy separately but im so glad i did. I loved this. ups and downs and strong and steady plot. well done! |
![]() ![]() ![]() hold on... they are literally doing all that and staying away bc it is that time of the month?! i must be missing something |
![]() ![]() ![]() i think he make fried doggos |
![]() ![]() The dynamics of the story have greatly diminished since arriving. Events are squeezed out of my finger. Pity. |
![]() ![]() What I love most about SnaGer is when Hermione demonstrates that Lily was a heartless superficial bitch when she didn't believe her best friend, left him at the hardest time of his life and started dating his tormentor who tortured him at least for over 5 years straight. |
![]() ![]() One of the coolest things about the Severus and Hermione pairing is the reactions of those around them, especially Harry and Ron. It's a shame that some fics neglect this, because it's a real fountain of fun. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm extremely disappointed in Hermione. That she doesn't see the guilt in Lupin, that he spent a year hiding from everyone that the fugitive criminal who was after Harry was an animagus. This possibility gave Black plenty of chances to kill Harry. As well as his irresponsibility in not drinking the potion and could bite and kill the whole school. Well, as a young school perfect, he didn't do anything when the four of them attacked and tortured Snape. But Snape is bad. She doesn't care that he was almost killed by a werewolf as a child and earned himself a mental trauma and then shielded Harry, Hermione, and Weasley 6 from the werewolf. This judgment of Granger, as well as given my previous comment in previous chapters, gives the impression that Hermione is as dumb and superficial as Lily. Perhaps Elora would be a better match for Severus than Granger. It would even be very romantic, she lost the man she loved, he lost the man he loved. She has the Heart of a Werewolf, he has the Heart of a Werewolf. Well, and she's very shrewd and clever like him. Hopefully she'll make Hermione jealous, or better yet, be a Sev couple forever. Honestly, I haven't seen any noticeably cool things from Hermione yet where you want to praise her and pat her on the head. Severus, on the other hand, is working very hard on himself to grow up. |
![]() ![]() ![]() accio wand? O_o |
![]() ![]() ![]() Many chapters ago he gave her an ultimatum. Conditionally saying that if she didn't leave now, she would be his forever. The author himself pointed this out. The fact that she didn't analyze his words and actions in any way after that statement and let things slide makes her look like an outright idiot. This spoils the pleasure of reading, because the main virtue of the couple is that they are both very intelligent. Obviously, if she had thought about her words for a second. She would have concluded that if she didn't want continued sex and romantic interest, she shouldn't walk around half-naked in front of him. That she was tormenting him. But from her reaction, she doesn't give it much thought at all, as if she were an impotent man in front of her. Although she has seen more than once from her own experience that this is not so. She has also clearly heard that he desires her. P.S. I know the fic is written and will not be edited. I never expected it to, just making my point to other readers. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay, Snape's past life analytics, really not much. I liked that you decided to reveal the truth through legiliments. The animal part of Severus wants the animal part of Hermione. The animal part of Hermione is fine with it. The rational part of Severus is unaware of what his animal part is doing. The rational part of Hermione doesn't know what her animal part is doing. Hence, two options. It's either not rape because the animal part craves it. Or it is rape of the sensible parts Severus and Hermione have suffered from their own animal parts. |
![]() ![]() ![]() She's an idiot if she says he should just forget everything and live happily ever after. Severus is right, Hermione has absolutely no idea what he's been through. I don't see any deep analysis of his life here, either on her part or his. And if you analyze the information from the canon, you can see that almost his whole life from the age of 6 until the end of the war was almost hell. He had hardly any bright moments. Every time he showed weakness he was beaten to the spot. |
![]() ![]() Shit, not an unplanned pregnancy. I hate that. By the way, that's pretty delusional, considering she should have noticed something leaking out of her in the morning. Oh, and the other signs. P.S. I know the story is already finished, this is not a message to the author. |