it's heartening to see someone make fanfiction of Moddesits works the man is really an underrated author. going through series in 'chronological order on audibook currently which holy crap reading the books the old fashioned way with cheap paperback and hardcover editions for the two newest books never realised just how long the books were considering I could finish them in a day and have read the books half a dozen times. so on that note thank you for writing this fic for such an underrated series and author.

I just wanted to say that this is the first fanfic that I've seen on this story. This is one of my all time favorite authors and series. I've read them at least 5 times. I really admire the time and effort that you have put into making the story believable as well following the original premise of the author. Awesome job.

And finally what do dogs dream of.

But that time is over

Sometimes I am called papa smurf

Just who do you think I am

You filthy casual

Because we're all in the DANGER ZONE

Baby come back to our hut

And kill the islanders

Come on now, we've got to get the watermelons

And I dream of people in foxfur suits. And Latex

BUTTER LETTUCE

This story is awesome so far and has a lot of potential, so it makes me sad that you may well have abandoned it. Spelling, grammar etc. is of a very high standard, and you have a lucid, highly readable style that made reading a pleasure.

The only thing I'd suggest is writing one chapter per chapter block, rather than putting multiples in the one slot. It's not an intuitive way of formatting and the length of this first chapter is slightly daunting.

I'll be following in the hopes that you continue this story :)

Regards,

Edhla, archivist at The Reviews Lounge, Too

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Yes! finally a update! :3 I look forward to the next one!