|Reviews for Soarers' Children|
| jhado1968 chapter 12 . 11/25/2014
I just wanted to say that this is the first fanfic that I've seen on this story. This is one of my all time favorite authors and series. I've read them at least 5 times. I really admire the time and effort that you have put into making the story believable as well following the original premise of the author. Awesome job.
| Dalebeto Feninski chapter 11 . 1/24/2014
And finally what do dogs dream of.
| Dalebeto Feninski chapter 10 . 1/24/2014
But that time is over
| Dalebeto Feninski chapter 9 . 1/24/2014
Sometimes I am called papa smurf
| Dalebeto Feninski chapter 8 . 1/24/2014
Just who do you think I am
| Dalebeto Feninski chapter 7 . 1/24/2014
You filthy casual
| Dalebeto Feninski chapter 6 . 1/24/2014
Because we're all in the DANGER ZONE
| Dalebeto Feninski chapter 5 . 1/24/2014
Baby come back to our hut
| Dalebeto Feninski chapter 4 . 1/24/2014
And kill the islanders
| Dalebeto Feninski chapter 3 . 1/24/2014
Come on now, we've got to get the watermelons
| Dalebeto Feninski chapter 2 . 1/24/2014
And I dream of people in foxfur suits. And Latex
| Dalebeto Feninski chapter 1 . 1/16/2014
| Edhla chapter 1 . 11/2/2013
This story is awesome so far and has a lot of potential, so it makes me sad that you may well have abandoned it. Spelling, grammar etc. is of a very high standard, and you have a lucid, highly readable style that made reading a pleasure.
The only thing I'd suggest is writing one chapter per chapter block, rather than putting multiples in the one slot. It's not an intuitive way of formatting and the length of this first chapter is slightly daunting.
I'll be following in the hopes that you continue this story :)
Edhla, archivist at The Reviews Lounge, Too
| Zaraih chapter 10 . 12/31/2012
Yes! finally a update! :3 I look forward to the next one!
| Darkkon27 chapter 9 . 9/30/2012