|Reviews for One after another|
| forgottencharacter chapter 6 . 11/16/2012
| Richard chapter 4 . 8/18/2012
| NightHawk11111 chapter 6 . 8/2/2012
Please update. Don't give up on this story. I read it :) and I think its good. Anyway this is a great story.
| Guest chapter 3 . 6/27/2012
Oh, where do I start? Your grammar, for example, you used "quite" instead of "quiet". two completely different meanings. Is this set in the US? If it is, we don't use 999, it's 911. If not, never mind. You definintely need a beta.
| Joniron chapter 6 . 6/25/2012
I enjoyed your shorts very much, the one with the shamblers in the school is my favorite. I was kinda expecting a class full of zom kids.
| Good Work chapter 3 . 6/21/2012
Nice chapter, please continue.
| rhoades chapter 4 . 2/15/2012
Just finished reading the latest chapter and have to say I like where you are going with it.
Just a few mistakes with sentance structure but nothing major. Keep up with the story and hope to read an update soon. - Rhoades
| World3nder chapter 2 . 12/1/2011
These are very good, I would say that these are the best creepypastas I have ever read.
| Andrew.was.here chapter 2 . 9/21/2011
Nice job. Not much else to say, a few spelling errors but only like 1 or 2...but who cares. That was a great story!
| Chromesdddm chapter 1 . 8/31/2011
This really is a good start to a good story.I'll have to make sure to read more of it.
| Bolthorn chapter 1 . 8/23/2011
Interesting start. Cannot wat to read more