|Reviews for walking forward|
| aozora ekusutashii chapter 1 . 3/14/2012
This story is so bittersweet. :'D
I love the emotion in this story, from start to end, along with the characterization. Although they have grown up, I'm glad to see that they're not too out-of-character, like what some writers tend to do.
The plot twist of Niou and Kirihara dating was a really crucial point in the story, and it was very interesting to read.
Great work! :3
| Rellwen chapter 1 . 2/1/2012
This is the first fanfic I've read for this pairing and i have to say it was a fantastic introduction to the two.
your story had me nearly in tears it was so emotional and extremely well written! I'll be sure to check out your other works.
| Sileny chapter 1 . 10/9/2011
This is so sweet. It took me a while to get used to the way you spaced it, but I guess that's just me. XD I've never seen a plot like this done before, but it was executed very well. :)
I especially liked the line about the two left behind comforting each other. Great job on this!
| Frog-kun chapter 1 . 10/5/2011
I really, really liked this. It was such an interesting plot - not something I often see. I was really sucked into the story. I loved the dynamic between Marui and Niou. Niou had such awesome lines, I was grinning throughout the entire thing. Kirihara's involvement surprised me a bit, but I liked how you revealed how much of a heart the story had. It was a well-paced narrative, if a bit rushed towards the end there. (I'm pretty sure Niou and Marui's farewell could have had more of an impact.)
But whatever, yeah. I think you're one of my favourite authors for a reason XD
| merissala chapter 1 . 9/20/2011
damn, just damn
this story is good
it was so short, yet just flowed so well.
i really like it
you're from livejournal? :DD
I love the ending, that it ended with marui seeing jackal. AHHHH, such an adorable story. i mean, it was unfortunate what happened, kind of angst and tragic, but at the same time, it was sweet. niou was sweet. i never have read niouxmarui. im a platinum fan (very very very biased with them) but... heheheh, long years w/o really being in this fandom, my biases kind of flew out the window. i read anything good i guess. these days, all the good stories seem to have left. its hard to find anything good. :)) very good. i loved it alot!
| Notthatbou chapter 1 . 9/6/2011
OMG This fic was freakin' awesome!
I really got into the story, reading at night in the bedroom thinking 'omigosh what will happen? what will happen!' This was so fantastic. It made me feel a lot of things.
This fic inserts the story into the brain and you get with it all the night (and the day, and the other night, and...). I entered in the fic without reading the summary, so when I found Niou (really!) was a ghost I was really feeling like Marui xDDD. OMFG! O_O - something like this xD.
I love how you can keep that heartbreaking tension during all the story, and the ending. I think this fic shows and has the spirit of that deep relationship between Niou and Marui. No OoC-ness, what's so good.
I totally agree with the review I'm above of xD Under there xD
So, congrats! Keep writing D!
| Neon Genesis chapter 1 . 9/2/2011
HOLY CRAP AKAYA'S A MURDERER.
Moving past that, I love it. I can definitely see Marui as someone who's not good at keeping in touch. Your characterizations are excellent. I was so sure Niou committed suicide, and so I was kind of pleased to be proved wrong.
The emotions throughout this are great, and I like how you didn't go overboard. Especially how you ended it on a positive note.
Really great stuff. (:
| Chibi-Onee-chan chapter 1 . 8/31/2011
I was about to cry at the end. Really sad, but beautiful. Lovely work. :)
| Shinkencchi chapter 1 . 8/25/2011
This was, just ... awesome, really :)
I got a bit teary, but I loved this :)
| o0ElLiOto0oRuTh0o chapter 1 . 8/24/2011
Elliot:Its damn a tearjerker for me but you get the point.
| fyerigurl chapter 1 . 8/23/2011
Well this was just a lovely little fic. Amazingly, thoughtfully written with a touch of suspense. I love it.
| 321 chapter 1 . 8/23/2011
Aw, that was amazing! :) I think I got a little teary-eyed
| love at third sight chapter 1 . 8/23/2011
This is pretty interesting, although I wouldn't have imagined in a thousand years Niou plus Marui together. XD
I'm glad Niou is out of his misery, though. :) It was a nice fic. Happy ending. Nice work, KC!
| xLoveChuuChuuTrainx chapter 1 . 8/23/2011
Aww! That was so sweet! I feel like I'm going to cry!