Reviews for Fit Via Vi |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This was really interesting! You wrote both Marcus and Esca very well. I really liked that we were able to see exactly what they were thinking during the fight; that we were able to get into their mindset. I also enjoyed reading your historical notes. It's clear that you spent some time researching this (or you already knew about it from before). Great job! |
![]() ![]() Very nice story! I like your characterizations and historical details at the end! I hope to read more soon. |
![]() ![]() I love this story so much! It's worded wonderfully and I loved the different points of views. I will be reading more of your stories for sure! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the intensity. I like your writting, I wish you would write longer stories. To be honest, I'm longing to read something with flashbacks from Esca's past as a slave before he is thrown in the arena... I cant find anyone that does it! I will go on reading your fics! |
![]() ![]() Nice story, great ideas and i liked the way you added the factual detail - making it seem very real :) i'm kind of glad it wasn't a m/e romance story. they tend to get a tad annoying. |