|Reviews for Terminal Twilight|
| Help chapter 1 . 1/15
Omfg I've read this like 5 times since 2011 and I cry each time im
Thank u for this blessing it has helped 16 year old me as much as 12 year old me
| MyStoryStar chapter 28 . 7/31/2016
This is one of my favorite fanfictions ever! I love love it! :D I've read this stories several times over the years and I always forget I already read until a couple chapters in XD
Anyhoo, I live your work
| Justin Beck chapter 27 . 4/10/2016
Went from not wanting to even touch her to fucking her in what? Three chapters? I mean this dude has such a moral compass, he saves the whole kingdom...twice expecting nothing but when his morals come up, in there relationship he can't last three chapters? Like is this forreal? Literally facepalmed so hard after reading the last chapter. Also, after meeting Midna, his reaction is literally nothing. Although in the early chapters he was in a depression over it. I mean shouldnt there be a gracious reunion? I could go on because the plotholes are so vast but I think I have made my point.
| Justin Beck chapter 25 . 4/10/2016
Link turns 180 because wars tomorrow? but he knew that when he was acting coldly... I mean I feel like that is so unnatural. Came in looking for a Zelda X Link, now I am like, Damn that bitch is annoying
| Justin Beck chapter 19 . 4/10/2016
I always feel like Zelda needs to be sent this message watch?vyP_aCWRIDj0
| luisAM21 chapter 29 . 2/16/2016
it is 3 in the morning right now and I have started to read it last night. this is a truly amazing story that i kept interest in a long time thank you for writing this story even if this was written 4 years ago :P
| ThePredicate chapter 28 . 4/4/2015
This was an awesome journey, thanks for sharing it :) Gonna check out the sequel next
| TwilightSycro chapter 29 . 1/29/2015
This was a great read, and I'm glad I found this story. I don't like Zelink in Twilight Princess all that much, but the fact I read the entire story is incredible. I myself am a Midna and Link shipper. I honestly didn't think a relationship between Link and Zelda would work from where the game leaves off after Midna leaves, but you managed to make it work out very well, unlike some others. The biggest thing that bothered me was that it was Malon instead of Romani. I also like the whole time travel part, and the Hylians and Twili fighting alongside each other. I thought this was a very interesting story, and though I prefer Midna over Zelda, I really enjoyed it. Finally, I liked the ending and what happens in the epilogue with Midna, the Twili and Hylians, and I liked the humor. This review only sums up how I feel, as there is much more I liked. This is definitely one of the better stories I've read.
| tymeron chapter 29 . 12/30/2014
I must say...this story has left me in so much emotion and suspense to a moment I doubted would ever come. But when it did I was so relieved and happy. Honestly this story shoots off like a rocket into a flawless start, with the exception of the single quotes, "you're" in "your majesty", and "defiantly" rather than "definitely". But I dreaded the insensitivity of Link to Zelda's obvious feelings and felt it was an unnecessary addition to his understandable reluctance to kiss her. I also felt like the story contradicted with certain aspects of the Zelda universe, such as the fact that the Hero of Time is the Hero's Shade, or the probability that Termina is the personal purgatory to the Hero of Time after his death and didn't physically exist. I think there were many missed opportunities and holes. The girl in Romani Ranch...her name was Romani, not Malon. But I digest. This story is beautiful, and I thank you for feeding my obsession.
| Allmax chapter 24 . 12/30/2014
Feels. Agh. Love this :D
| Wraith Five chapter 1 . 2/23/2014
So far, the only thing I have a problem with here is how you indicate speech. Uh... Upon further investigation, your use of single quotation marks ('blah blah') rather than double quotation marks ("blah blah") is instead along the lines of a written dialect of sorts. I withdraw my complaint. (I will admit, I'm kind of trying to figure out a simple and efficient way to switch the single quotation marks to double quotation marks, as North American convention is to use double quotation marks for dialogue.)
So far, this fic looks pretty good! Your writing style looks pretty good, definitely better than most of the authors on this site. I don't think very many people know how to use a semicolon correctly.
I plan to leave more reviews for you, but I frequently forget to. I usually convert fics to ebooks and read them off my Kindle. Yeah, I read a LOT.
Until next time!
| Stormhelen chapter 28 . 2/17/2014
I love your story, It is really, really good.
It's fun to see Zelda's transformation from a snobby princess to a more humble woman with more personality, and a more free spirit.
Some of my favorite moments in the story is when Zelda'll milk a goat and think it feels like that she felt as if she was "viola thing it somehow."
I laughed so hard at that! D
I also like when Link sits behind Zelda to remind her how to ride. It was so frustrating that they did not kiss each other there. But it was probably just for the best anyway, otherwise the romantic tension between them would not existed, and that made you wondered when will they kiss each other.
But my favorite part is When Link goes up to Zelda's room to talk to her the night before the war, and he stands outside her door on his way back to his room thinking;
"If I was going to die, I would want to have seen my angel beforehand rather than after. Heaven couldn't provide the beauty that Hyrule's Princess had. Heaven couldn't send an angel to save me, for I already had one."
That says it all!
Again, this is a very good story. Good work!
| DrytotheDen chapter 29 . 1/11/2014
That was absolutely incredible, seriously you are an amazing writer, I was up till 4 in the morning because I couldn't stop reading it! :) you should write a one shot about the village of ordon's reaction to link telling them he's marrying Zelda (simultaneously becoming king of hyrule) and later when they meet their daughter Ivy, lol I'd love to see that!
| MyMother chapter 29 . 2/3/2013
Bravo to you. This is honestly one of the absolute best stories I've read so far. I was very sad at the passing of Raneem as I actually came to this story from twin glaives, but I understand it was necessary. You are an amazing writer and I hope you write more!
| MyMother chapter 1 . 2/1/2013