Reviews for Terminal Twilight
ThePredicate chapter 28 . 4/4
This was an awesome journey, thanks for sharing it :) Gonna check out the sequel next
TwilightSycro chapter 29 . 1/29
This was a great read, and I'm glad I found this story. I don't like Zelink in Twilight Princess all that much, but the fact I read the entire story is incredible. I myself am a Midna and Link shipper. I honestly didn't think a relationship between Link and Zelda would work from where the game leaves off after Midna leaves, but you managed to make it work out very well, unlike some others. The biggest thing that bothered me was that it was Malon instead of Romani. I also like the whole time travel part, and the Hylians and Twili fighting alongside each other. I thought this was a very interesting story, and though I prefer Midna over Zelda, I really enjoyed it. Finally, I liked the ending and what happens in the epilogue with Midna, the Twili and Hylians, and I liked the humor. This review only sums up how I feel, as there is much more I liked. This is definitely one of the better stories I've read.
tymeron chapter 29 . 12/30/2014
I must say...this story has left me in so much emotion and suspense to a moment I doubted would ever come. But when it did I was so relieved and happy. Honestly this story shoots off like a rocket into a flawless start, with the exception of the single quotes, "you're" in "your majesty", and "defiantly" rather than "definitely". But I dreaded the insensitivity of Link to Zelda's obvious feelings and felt it was an unnecessary addition to his understandable reluctance to kiss her. I also felt like the story contradicted with certain aspects of the Zelda universe, such as the fact that the Hero of Time is the Hero's Shade, or the probability that Termina is the personal purgatory to the Hero of Time after his death and didn't physically exist. I think there were many missed opportunities and holes. The girl in Romani Ranch...her name was Romani, not Malon. But I digest. This story is beautiful, and I thank you for feeding my obsession.
Allmax chapter 24 . 12/30/2014
Feels. Agh. Love this :D
Wraith Five chapter 1 . 2/23/2014
So far, the only thing I have a problem with here is how you indicate speech. Uh... Upon further investigation, your use of single quotation marks ('blah blah') rather than double quotation marks ("blah blah") is instead along the lines of a written dialect of sorts. I withdraw my complaint. (I will admit, I'm kind of trying to figure out a simple and efficient way to switch the single quotation marks to double quotation marks, as North American convention is to use double quotation marks for dialogue.)

So far, this fic looks pretty good! Your writing style looks pretty good, definitely better than most of the authors on this site. I don't think very many people know how to use a semicolon correctly.

I plan to leave more reviews for you, but I frequently forget to. I usually convert fics to ebooks and read them off my Kindle. Yeah, I read a LOT.

Until next time!
Wraith Five
Stormhelen chapter 28 . 2/17/2014
I love your story, It is really, really good.

It's fun to see Zelda's transformation from a snobby princess to a more humble woman with more personality, and a more free spirit.

Some of my favorite moments in the story is when Zelda'll milk a goat and think it feels like that she felt as if she was "viola thing it somehow."
I laughed so hard at that! D
I also like when Link sits behind Zelda to remind her how to ride. It was so frustrating that they did not kiss each other there. But it was probably just for the best anyway, otherwise the romantic tension between them would not existed, and that made you wondered when will they kiss each other.
But my favorite part is When Link goes up to Zelda's room to talk to her the night before the war, and he stands outside her door on his way back to his room thinking;
"If I was going to die, I would want to have seen my angel beforehand rather than after. Heaven couldn't provide the beauty that Hyrule's Princess had. Heaven couldn't send an angel to save me, for I already had one."
That says it all!

Again, this is a very good story. Good work!
DrytotheDen chapter 29 . 1/11/2014
That was absolutely incredible, seriously you are an amazing writer, I was up till 4 in the morning because I couldn't stop reading it! :) you should write a one shot about the village of ordon's reaction to link telling them he's marrying Zelda (simultaneously becoming king of hyrule) and later when they meet their daughter Ivy, lol I'd love to see that!
MyMother chapter 29 . 2/3/2013
Bravo to you. This is honestly one of the absolute best stories I've read so far. I was very sad at the passing of Raneem as I actually came to this story from twin glaives, but I understand it was necessary. You are an amazing writer and I hope you write more!
MyMother chapter 1 . 2/1/2013
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PrincessZelda450 chapter 1 . 12/15/2012
This was the first story I read on this site. I have read many more now but this is by far the best Like ever. In the history of zelink. I love you! You are epic! And ur other story is awesome xxxx
HeartMadeFullmetal chapter 27 . 7/22/2012
DEY GOTZ SEXY! I knew this was going to happen, I just knew it! Zelink, Zelink! Although usually I go for Midlink, I like Zelink too.
I really the the Woo-fucking-hoo part. That was funny!
Awesome story!
HeartMadeFullmetal chapter 19 . 7/18/2012
I don't think that Link is that good at being around girls. But you got to say, poor Link! He can't be with Midna 'cause she's in the Twilight Realm, and he can't be with Zelda 'cause she's the princess! And Ilia's kinda clingy.
Zelee5465 chapter 28 . 4/6/2012
That was the sweetest ending ever! 3 I love this story so much! Your a fabulous writer!
Zelee5465 chapter 18 . 4/5/2012
SQUEEEEEEEEEE! FIRST KISS! 3

I LOVE this story SOOOO much! You're an excellent writer!
zeldalink531 chapter 28 . 2/15/2012
That was such a wonderful story!

I loved it! SO MUCH!

Twilight Princess has got to be my favorite game. (Skyward sword a close second) I loved how you rectified the whole MIdna breaking the mirror, I kept thinking,'no, she can't do that!' But you found a way to undo it and I loved it!

Wonderful writing, a few typos but everyone has them. Can't wait to read more from you!
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