Reviews for Custom Robo Once Peace, Now War
Guest chapter 1 . 7/29/2012
First read prologue, skimmed through a bit, noted a few errors.
1: Rahu was destoryed by the fight. The Hero used the watch, which initiated it.
2: The Hero's father wasn't the 'evil' of the Z Syndicate. After his death, the other three 'leaders' Oroboro(?) Eliza and her twin (forgotten names) were the evil. Z wasn't originally bad.
An0nYm0uS-DMTR1 chapter 3 . 5/24/2012
yo UPDATE plz XD

u know u want to lol
Culebra del Sol chapter 2 . 9/5/2011
*sniff* AAHHH... the smell of sweet, sweet potential. Your writing is just about perfect. It's like reading the first couple of chapters in a novel. The fact that you're writing about one of the best underrated games is a bonus.
steelHearts914 chapter 2 . 8/30/2011
Great story so far. Loved the game and I'm liking this! Keep it up!