Reviews for A Girl's Day Out
NegaiKoumi chapter 10 . 8/1/2013
Nice chap Mon Koo Read...
Lee-Jane chapter 1 . 1/6/2013
Was going to read this, but then I saw all your reviews were either Koumi Kuz, or that Kari was OOC. Decided to give it a shot anyway. Did you understand Kari's character at all? You turned her into Mimi when she was being a brat in that castle.

"I'm dieting, do you never listen? Gawd!" Kari shouted as she lay on the floor, struggling to get free.

""Just now, weren't you listening? Gawd you are useless!" Kari moaned angrily as she head butted the door closed again."

I recommend either re-working her character, or just advertising that Kari is OOC. Sorry, I'm not interested in reading more.
Koumi-Locc chapter 10 . 7/12/2012
Koo Mon...
JyouraSorato chapter 9 . 6/28/2012
Koo mon nice read yo! Koumi/Sorato ect Out Peace..
Gennai's Acolyte chapter 2 . 10/8/2011
Holy crap, what the heck did you do to Kari! Her personality is completely different than in the show! I've only read two chapters, but I do intend to read the rest. However, I just want to know why you have turned the character into someone else with no justification. Other than that, I can't yet comment, because I haven't read far enough to get into the plot.
TheAddicted chapter 1 . 10/8/2011
So far so good, I'm liking the overall idea. Especially each of the girls different povs and all. Except Kari did seem a little moody, but hey she's a teen girl.
KoumiLoccness chapter 8 . 9/30/2011
Good chap nice chap! I see this happening Mimi tieing a evil Digimon..And Miyako and Sora laughing kuz they know what is it like to have friends that will be there through think and thin and Hikari helping Mimi was bad-ass cant to to9 see Lilly-mon in action as well Peace kuz Koumi Out til next-time...
Lord Pata chapter 7 . 9/17/2011
Kari definitively needs a memory refreshing, how she could forget Salamon is Gatomon's rookie form when she saw it several times? first in 01 after they defeated VenomMyotismon, and in 02 all the times after Sylphimon dedigivolved before they got Azulongmon's digicore o.o

I think the "light" on her memory got turned off XD
KoumiLoccness chapter 7 . 9/16/2011
Koo! So now Mimi is in trouble oaky but why is Taichi there in the first place? Cant wait to read s9ome more soon kuz Peace Koumi Out..
KoumiLoccness chapter 6 . 9/14/2011
So Hikari gots her brother's courage coo! Nice chap Hikari is bad ass here Peace kuz Koumi Out I hope I can see the guys soon and I hope there's a hint of Koumi kuz Kou- like 'Mimi what did you do all day' lol...
KoumiLoccness chapter 5 . 9/8/2011
I hope before this ficc gets done can you add the DDs boys with their girls so they wont be left out! Mimi trying to flirt I hope Kou don't find out then again hes home with his boys lol! Koumi Out nice chap I hope they get a spy for Kou so he cant really say he doesn't know nothing when he's not with Mimi yo...
KoumiLoccness chapter 4 . 9/2/2011
Hikari is bad-ass me loves it! Too bad in the anime she's so nice and sweet and I luv the part where she slaps Miyako kuz really good part in the show kuz Peace Koumi Out...
Seadramon chapter 1 . 8/23/2011
Plz continue!