|Reviews for Nothing But A Pack Of Dogs|
| Guest chapter 8 . 2/11
KEEP WRITING PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ
| BeautifulBella18 chapter 9 . 9/12/2014
I can't believe this story has stopped for now... I'd love to take it off your hands and continue it. I have a ton of ideas of where it could go... :)
| Guest chapter 8 . 9/5/2013
I love it , keep writing PLZ
| That-Lady chapter 9 . 8/18/2012
Hey, I loved this story for a couple reasons:
She had a pretty bad past, making her way more realistic than Bella in the story
You made the Vampires the bad guys (thank god, back to their roots!)
And she had some pretty kick butt powers
Here's a critique:
Grammar grammar grammar dear, ask a friend to proof read your stuff, or read over it once or twice before posting.
There is a lot of information missing, maybe add a little more imagery and details (specifically her powers?)
The scene transitions were a little off. Maybe use dashes, symbols, or "two days later:"
Character development, give them a certain amount of... je ne sais quoi (I don't know what is the direct translation, but basically means unique-ness culturally)
| tinkerbear10 chapter 8 . 4/16/2012
aww its cute and i hope there is more to it
| Angel-Of-Death-136 chapter 8 . 4/15/2012
woooooooooooooooooooooo! excellent update I'm really liking the story I'd like to read more soon _
| blackangel150 chapter 8 . 4/12/2012
| xelacy chapter 8 . 4/12/2012
| b.bumblebee chapter 7 . 2/12/2012
Loved it! Please update soon!
| 5SecsOfLARRYcat chapter 7 . 1/29/2012
Amazing chapter! I love it! Please update soon! :D
| YourNotGonnaChangeMe chapter 7 . 1/29/2012
I love your story's can't wait to read more. :-)
| AnnaKathlyn15 chapter 6 . 1/21/2012
its interesting. i would like to read more!
| Angel-Of-Death-136 chapter 6 . 11/26/2011
Loving the story Han update soon I wanna now what happens next Liz _
| queen of terror chapter 6 . 11/10/2011
forgot to add this but you can also have the guys (especially) jared say something nice to her like we love you being around and your family well always be here to protect you
| millymollymanda chapter 6 . 10/24/2011
plz plz plz update soon love it !