|Reviews for Circus Gothica Du Freak|
| Grava chapter 24 . 3/15
There are half Vampanese. And yes FMA is one of my favorite anime so I would be interested in a story on that fandom by you.
| draken14142 chapter 24 . 12/31/2013
| Guest chapter 12 . 12/19/2013
Update: writing improved, characterization of ocs good, still average narration. not bad at all. still not WOO AWESOME but hey its prob a matter of personal taste
| Guest chapter 2 . 12/19/2013
Well, since you asked, kind of ubiquitously in the middle of your story...
The actual prose writing of the Darren Shan saga makes me fall over dead. It is, in a word, pretty crap! Your writing is better than that in the way you don't insert an adverb after every line and you are capable of putting 'said' in front of your dialogue. And if he and multitudes of shit writers can get published, you probably can too. Your writing is fine, but the narration seems amateurish. There's repetition, kind of eh prose, it just sounds kind of unrefined. I don't know, get older or read more books. (I can't talk considering my own writing also makes me fall over dead, but hey I... read?) It's average, not bad, definitely open to improvement.
| HermioneX chapter 24 . 12/10/2013
| Sasha chapter 24 . 11/25/2013
| nobodie heartles chapter 24 . 8/18/2013
I think this fanfic is great but when will there be new chapters?
i'd love to read the end, please upload the rest. It's so good you can't stop now!
| TheAmethystGirl chapter 7 . 5/5/2013
Oh, I forgot. In the sixth chapter you wrote something like 'shining in the sunlight' which meant that it was daytime when Mr Crepsley went to the Circus Gothica and got attacked by Danny, right?
Hey! You know that vampires can't go out under the sunlight! Mr Crepsley should have his skin burnt already, or whatever that happens when vampires go out into the sunlight. Correct that if you would. But if you don't want to, I don't really mind. Your story's getting interesting anyway.
| TheAmethystGirl chapter 6 . 5/5/2013
*shrieks in excitement*
I don't know why, but why do I think this story's getting much much better? I had been reading this fic since like an hour ago. At first, I thought it was kind of...weird. But know as I read more and more chapter until now, I must say - OH I LOVE YOUR STORY!
I'm a fan of both The Saga of Darren Shan and Danny Phantom. It's been a long time though since I watched Danny Phantom. I found DP since I was maybe eleven and fell in love with it. I think Danny's cute (too bad he's not a real person but just a drawing). But my biggest crush is the Darren Shan saga.
The idea of CDF and DP crossover is cool. You know what? Since CDF is a book (no pictures of the characters there, and I haven't found the manga yet), I think I pictured Darren a little bit like Danny, only he has brown hair and brown eyes.
Hey, is this story completed already? I don't see the 'complete' word up there. If it isn't yet, please update this, okay? I'm looking forward to this. This is going to be into one of my favs.
| Myrachan8 chapter 24 . 3/29/2013
can't wait for the next chapter to come out! :D
i'll be waiting for it, so...PLZ CONTINUE! :D
cya next chapter ;)
| RCRC36 chapter 24 . 3/3/2013
PLEASE RIGHT MORE FOR THIS STORY ITS SOWE GOOD
| Htgr8 chapter 24 . 2/28/2013
Oops *blushes* I keep forgetting to review!
Sorry about that!
Anyways, I think this story is absolutely amazing! I remember that this was one of the main stories I read when I first got on fanfiction during the summer. I swear that I checked on it every day, and hoped that you would post something!
Love it! Please continue to be awesome!
| GuardianWitchDemiGhost chapter 24 . 2/1/2013
VGF:You need to update, that is all i have to say. xP I will end with my goodbyes,Ta.
| The-Burnt-Marshmallow chapter 1 . 11/24/2012
I've already read this story and reveiwed everything and all that- just under a different name. Not gonna tell you, cause I'm mysterious like that.
I'm Mog's( You know her as Fullmetal-Soul) sister Mars. If she bugged your bloody brains out, I'm dreadfully sorry about that. See, Mog's a tad bit of her rocker about reviewing. She always puts her (ugh, I don't know the American saying, but us Brits say toss in some euros) about a chappie. She's been ranting about you since I told her to read this.
I'm regretting that now. I want to bash her barking head in.
Anywho, I just wanted to warn you that if you post a crappy chappie, Mog's going to rain hell and brimstone upon you until you appoligize and fix it.
And an angry Mog is worse than Winry in an autoshop
| princessbinas chapter 24 . 11/21/2012
is there any way to return him into a regular half human-ghost? Being half vampire makes me think he is going to become that psycho evil future version of himself. It creeps me out. The story is still good though.