Reviews for It Began With Death
Perfect-Wretched chapter 2 . 5/14/2012
I like it!

I think you wrote as Homunculus very well, though the female version admittedly caught me a little off-guard.

You managed to pull it off, though.

You missed very few things, and then they were only small. (a comma here, a conjunction there, etc.)I really do hope you finish this.

Good luck!