Reviews for A Beacon Lost
Your fans chapter 1 . 7m
Guest chapter 7 . 6/17
Where is the sequel that you promised us?
Revanchist21 chapter 7 . 5/28
This story was interesting and I really hope you will have a sequel in the near future hopefully. Keep up the good work man!
Mikotal chapter 7 . 3/17
Really love the story hope you continue/begin on the sequel soon. If so please let me know.
Guest chapter 7 . 12/27/2016
Damn Ninja cutting onion
Kallie Foxxe chapter 7 . 11/19/2016
... Dang, Daniel! I... Bruh ! No...!
Inigo Montoya chapter 1 . 8/29/2016
"As Obi-Wan continued to rape her pussy..."


You used that word. I don't think it means what you think it means.

Because that was certainly a consensual experience. The Twi'lek wanted to be pleased and never said No.
Kallie Foxxe chapter 1 . 7/26/2016
That definitely turned me on. WHAT IS LIFE!? Satine would be made. You definitely taught me something.
Axcel chapter 1 . 8/29/2015
Even in the shittiest situations, Obi-Wan still manages to be a hero and a genuinely great guy.
Salce chapter 1 . 4/25/2015
It's always so painfully embarrassing to read lemon when it's quite obvious that the author's whole sexual experience stems from fanfiction, their own fantasy or other, let's say japanese forms of "entertainment". Do yourself a favor and get laid, but don't try shoving anything into your partners womb - I can't imagine that any woman would appreciate that, considering that the cervix is kinda in the way.
serialkeller chapter 7 . 10/24/2014
He is not seriously dead is he? Also Aayla, you bitch. Hurry up and write the sequel because there are far too many unanswered questions.
Link Evergreen chapter 7 . 1/19/2014
Very Interesting. I am looking forward to reading the sequel.
tonksfan94 chapter 7 . 1/15/2014
Great story, eagerly waiting for a sequel...
jitzu chapter 7 . 11/29/2013
so,where's the sequel?c'mon,almost cried in the end,hurry up!
Frost Metal 0-1 chapter 7 . 11/2/2013
Uh, when is the sequel coming out? I really want to know what is going to happen next!

But wow, Obi-Wan is executed, but from the way that Naarva was smiling, I think that he will be coming back some how in the sequel or his plan will commence from his death. I am kind of surprised that Aayla, Luminara, Naarva, and possibly Beela have (or had if he is still dead in the sequel) feeling for Obi-Wan that all developed in different ways. I also feel that the Republic will likely be coming unraveled and all its secrets coming to light just from Kenobi's Execution not to mention either a lot of defections or desertions by the clones or even a coup d'├ętat by several clone units that were angered by the Kenobi's Execution.

Please get the sequel up soon, I really would like to know what is going to happen next and how Obi-Wan's death will affect future events.
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