Reviews for I Will be Your Slave
Zika chapter 1 . 12/27/2011
Good oneshot, one thing, she was scared about pain, yet no mention at all about her hymen? If that was her first time, as Jareth stated at the end, (I know some women are born without one and sometimes riding a bike or something will break it), wouldn't there need to be mention, either her pain or his surprise?
silfursvik chapter 1 . 12/6/2011
that...was...awesome. i loved it! but...waiting a year...?wow sarah. i seriously would have never left him in the first place. lol
kem1112 chapter 1 . 11/19/2011
well done :)
mynagoldenwings chapter 1 . 10/21/2011
great story!
LadyCavalier chapter 1 . 10/8/2011
TuT Beautiful. Just. Beautiful.
Safiiri chapter 1 . 9/25/2011
That was an awesome lemon, loved it :)
AngelaScarlet chapter 1 . 9/11/2011
very nice I really enjoyed your story. :-)
shadewatcher chapter 1 . 8/28/2011
I soo do love a happy ending. The fact that there was a bit of lemon in it made it all the sweeter. :P
Just One Thing chapter 1 . 8/25/2011
Sarah's eyes are green. Other than that, good job. Haha. :3
Animegeek123 chapter 1 . 8/24/2011
Hey this was a very beautiful oneshot and for nit writing in 3rd person alot you did really well keep up the good work!
myna chapter 1 . 8/24/2011
great job! the only thing is i think unless im mistaken you missed a few words here:"Did your first time my darling Sarah?" ... any way i got it and you did great!
Icyheart666 chapter 1 . 8/24/2011
Sexy and hot! Great oneshot!